Audition

Another

fucked up nigger fantasy.

nothing new, needs some work

The sex was ok, but could have been better timed. It moved too quick from foreplay to sex and wasn't very descriptive about the feeling (orgasms, ect.) Also I was caught by the line "Byron told her she had herself figure. Cathy said thanks, wore her clothes back on and returned to her chair just when her boyfriend inquired as to what sort of feature she would be in." I think you could do better with some kind of editor to proof your work.

Another dumb white girl being bred IR

Hope she ditched her boyfriend first

Another tiny dicked nigger fantasy.

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oh that was really

hard work and so much imagination, completly new with lots of ideas, wow

Too Rush

Was a great idea, but your really rushed. DFo more build up and detail next time.

all women fantasize about a black cock

Very much in line with real life-like situations, good reading to say the least.

And

And then what?