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Definitely.
Searingly. Sexual... Perfectly…as always. Erotic…as ever. Oh, just open the Roget's on the word "excellence" and take your pick. It's all true. How can I describe perfection?
hot and bothered
Such wonderful sexuality, love your graphic descriptions, they took me to the edge, and then over! But this isn't just a wank-story, though I had to wank. It is a piece of real life, which is what really lifts it above the ordinary on Lit. And I loved the edginess of their tentative exploration of d/s. A bit of real sexuality. Beautifully written.
wow
Just found this. A HOT story. Im weak from what it made me do to myself. Im going to read more ofyr storeis.
wow
Just found this. A HOT story. Im weak from what it made me do to myself. Im going to read more ofyr storeis.
wow
Just found this. A HOT story. Im weak from what it made me do to myself. Im going to read more ofyr storeis.
Speechless
I cant find the words to describe how awesome that is!
Well worth the wait
You've written a complex story, and finished it with disarming simplicity. Life IS like that. What a romance! (Sigh)
At a loss for words...
I find that I am at a loss as to how to explain my feelings towards this series. This work is by far my favorite. You touched every emotion deep inside me. Brilliant seems an inadequate word. Please sir, write your book.
Yes, worth a wait
It was really worth a wait. Eroticism at it's BEST is the only way to describe this story. Thank you for taking the time to write this story & for sharing it. Looking forward for more.
what a F A N T A S T I C read...
Definitely worth the wait! I checked in regularily,wanting so badly to know how this couple would fair,and now I pray you'll add more chapters. I want to thank you, Sir for sharing your lusty tale. You've done a fine job developing these characters,and this plot, making it all so real. I envy Julie the freedom she has to just be who she is, with a man who adores her.(the hair scene was so endearing). What a rush,to be a part of this couples lives,to share in their erotic explorations. Again Thank you so much.G
I just discovered
the last two chapters of this lovely story. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for your gift.
Simply
brilliant. You have a new and ardent fan. G
Wow
A little raunchy, a little sweet -- nice mix. Well done. :)
lovely
Working my way through your stories. This one is by far my favorite. It is a sweet combination of life with all it's complication and love with all it's endless possiblities. Who doesn't want a happy ending, finding that thing in life that just makes you smile.
Sweet and hot
You're a fine writer, whatever theme you choose, but this chapter is particularly arousing. I really like the combination of romance and hot sex. You're good; VERY good, actually. Nice work.
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