The story was rolling along very nicely, but at the end there was a plateu and a hurried, uninspired ending. I was enjoying your writing and felt cheated that it dropped so soon. It felt like you stopped paying attention after the candles got lit.
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Sudden drop-off
The story was rolling along very nicely, but at the end there was a plateu and a hurried, uninspired ending. I was enjoying your writing and felt cheated that it dropped so soon. It felt like you stopped paying attention after the candles got lit.
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