....fairly unique Idea....pistolpackinpete
Wouldn't it be exciting to find out what would happen if he gave the trinket to his daughter ?????
This is great, best facial fiction writing for a long while. Looking forward to the big blast happening not in fantasy but in reality.
great start to what could be a promising series; hope he will give her a real time facial in the next part
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Great start with a....
....fairly unique Idea....pistolpackinpete
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Wouldn't it be exciting to find out what would happen if he gave the trinket to his daughter ?????
Glad it's chapter 1 with more to cum
This is great, best facial fiction writing for a long while. Looking forward to the big blast happening not in fantasy but in reality.
great start
great start to what could be a promising series; hope he will give her a real time facial in the next part
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