by ingarlm
I just love this series! I'm glad it's not over yet. Looking forward to the next chapter.
The best to yet. I've got to say that I'm anticipating the next chapter 6. I loved this chapter and you sure know to keep the readers addictied to your stories. Is it going to be another week before you submit the next chapter?
NJ<USA
ahhh another fantastic chapter from the master story teller. Cant wait for more. Keep it up
I love your wrting but did u have to make us wait a week for a story we already new? I mean I like his point of veiw but ur at the best part don't leave us hanging. Oh and don't get intimidated ur wrighting is amazing. Sorry for any spelling or gramatical errors on my part. Just please get on with the story
Oh you sneaky devil! I cant believe your keeping us in suspense like this! Love your writing! Your amazing!
I got excited seeing that was a new chapter so soon. Although I love the point of view from both parties within a story, this one just told us what already happened. I prefer a switch in POVs that progresses the story along while giving us different perspectives. Still, love where the story is going. Looking forward to more.
Always a pleasure to read you. The only thing that drives me crazy is that time is just not on my side to read the updates lately but believe you me, I'll get to them eventually. ACL still awaits... Lol at least it will still be there when I get the chance. Thanx for sharing... Cat
Since almost all of this chapter is simply a reprise of the preceding two chapters, mainly in the exact same words -- some of the best, hottest sex included -- I was going to yank a star from the rating. But dad blame it, I love it! And the added info anent the kidnapping of Alex heightens the danger and tension that threaten the lovers' future. Please let their romance have a lovely outcome!
You are a great storyteller. I loved reading Rob's feelings and thoughts and was happy that he asked Chief for a life together after. The story is flowing very well
Most of this chapter was just a waist. Kind of seemed redundant & ment to leave us hanging.😒