All Comments on 'Out Of The Shadows Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Spellbinding!

I just love this series! I'm glad it's not over yet. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Danae72Danae72over 14 years ago
Great!

As wonderful as the rest. Can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
OMG

The best to yet. I've got to say that I'm anticipating the next chapter 6. I loved this chapter and you sure know to keep the readers addictied to your stories. Is it going to be another week before you submit the next chapter?

NJ<USA

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I love IT !!!!

ahhh another fantastic chapter from the master story teller. Cant wait for more. Keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Come on

I love your wrting but did u have to make us wait a week for a story we already new? I mean I like his point of veiw but ur at the best part don't leave us hanging. Oh and don't get intimidated ur wrighting is amazing. Sorry for any spelling or gramatical errors on my part. Just please get on with the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Love it

Oh you sneaky devil! I cant believe your keeping us in suspense like this! Love your writing! Your amazing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Not Fair

I got excited seeing that was a new chapter so soon. Although I love the point of view from both parties within a story, this one just told us what already happened. I prefer a switch in POVs that progresses the story along while giving us different perspectives. Still, love where the story is going. Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Fine piece of work...

Always a pleasure to read you. The only thing that drives me crazy is that time is just not on my side to read the updates lately but believe you me, I'll get to them eventually. ACL still awaits... Lol at least it will still be there when I get the chance. Thanx for sharing... Cat

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
love it, love it, love it

Must have update soon, please hurry.

taxpapabobtaxpapabobover 14 years ago
Rerun Shadows (ala TV?)

Since almost all of this chapter is simply a reprise of the preceding two chapters, mainly in the exact same words -- some of the best, hottest sex included -- I was going to yank a star from the rating. But dad blame it, I love it! And the added info anent the kidnapping of Alex heightens the danger and tension that threaten the lovers' future. Please let their romance have a lovely outcome!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Rob's POV was very sweet

You are a great storyteller. I loved reading Rob's feelings and thoughts and was happy that he asked Chief for a life together after. The story is flowing very well

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Most of this chapter was just a waist. Kind of seemed redundant & ment to leave us hanging.😒

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