No plot, character development and the descriptive narrative of Bill O'Reilly.
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Anonymous12/07/09
A young boys fantasy
Reads like the first wet dream of a 16 yr old boy. Why does every girl in the poor stories have 36D boobs? Generally means the story is lacking in other areas for a 'grab'.
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Awful comes to mind
No plot, character development and the descriptive narrative of Bill O'Reilly.
Practice might make you better, but get started now...
A young boys fantasy
Reads like the first wet dream of a 16 yr old boy. Why does every girl in the poor stories have 36D boobs? Generally means the story is lacking in other areas for a 'grab'.
door open
coming inside
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