A Question of Trust

nice believable

2nd read, loved it again. why is it that once struck with cupids arrow, you seldom forget it. as bad as life can be, you never forget that first love, at least for guys. I know some 70 year old guys at work that still remember their first love. I don't know if women have this kind of memory or not, but then again, I find most women very shallow and self centered. Rob's heart will take over in no time.

another slut

You can NEVER trust a slut again. I'm glad Rob is taking her up on her offer and if he's smart, he'll keep Juanita available (she's more honest, anyway) and treat Darcy like the slut she is. If she thinks its alright to let another guy touch her ass, what's to stop her from letting him go further later on? I swear I believe this with all my heart; once a slut, always a slut! The poor bitches just can't help themselves so just find them, fuck them and disrespect them because they don't have any respect. for themselves.

well itis like this

Darcy is coming on too fast for my money. My first question is why--then after that other questions would follow.
If she takes up with friend after a couple of drinks, what will be the next excuse

No second chance.

I can't see giving her another round. If it looks like a duck it is and ducks don't change.

trust

You didn't trust. Your instinct told you she was into that kiss. It doesn't matter if you trust her....as long as you trust yourself. Walk away dude.

WHEN YOU SKATE ON RAZOR BLADES

you have to watch out for the barb-wire. TK U MLJ LV NV

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Thinkin' with the little,brain generally gets you in trouble.

How about....

Part two?

hmmm

to me it was her marrying him.
and just 8 months later.

She didnt try more to get him back? Following him to alaska would have been a strong statement.

But marrying the guy? That is also a strong statement.

Blah, I Wouldn't Trust Her

She says she had too much to drink and wasn’t thinking clearly.

That could explain the FIRST time he saw them dancing inappropriately, but the SECOND time she obviously knew what she was doing because he moved his hands, and then she STILL went out back with him.

She basically should have had nothing to do with Mark after the first dancing incident.

Exactly

You can't trust her. All she is capable of is a friends with benefits arrangement.
I hate cheaters.

Another sissy wimp suckered is born

This guy has to be a loser. She knew exactly what she was doing and he is so stupid he believes her Bulls hit excuse for being a cheating cunt. Pathetic!

good story

people are getting on him for taking her back. i dont think it was that bad. the dancing was bad, but why didnt he say something. speak up. if you dont she will think you dont mind. yes the kissing was bad and it would piss me off. the thing is that she was drunk and all she did was make out. a single drunken mistake that she didnt even fuck him shouldnt preclude him from giving her a second chance. just let her know there wont be a third. also keep an eye on her. besides he is just fucking her, its not like he proposed.

i walked into a relationship like this one

been paying for more years than I care to remember... there is only one winner and it is NOT ME

FWB

Keep it a Friends With Benefits relationship. I guarantee you that within a year she'll be gone.

Good story, I guess...but...

This was written, seeming like it was just a filler story, or something. It has this hard, jaded, "I don't give a fuck," edge to it. Kinda made me wonder why you wrote it? Like...there was nothing better for you to do, at the time?

I've read your stories JPB and you are a good writer....so, what's up with this story? Just knocking out a brain fart idea, you had some night, half drunk and bored, or what?

I agree, with the one comment here on this latest comments page, about this story:

The guy did watch this Mark, start heavy petting while too close dancing with his finance. He watched Mark go way to far with her, by putting his hands on Darcy's ass and neither of them did anything to stop it, and neither did Darcy's engaged, spouse-to-be.

If he was going to do anything, he should have walked out there on the dance floor shoved them apart and stopped it, right then. Reminded Darcy, who's finance she was and that she had no right to hustle anyone else, or let them hustle her like that, without stopping it herself!

The sensible thing to do right then, was Take her by the wrist, walk her back to the tables, grab her coat and purse, pay their part of the tab and go home, right then!

After they get home, sit her ass down and have a serious nose-to-nose discussion with Darcy, on what you won't allow her to do anymore, as your wife to be! That sort of talk!

He just sits there, watches Mark feel his fiancé up, and does nothing. Then, when he see Mark walk to the head, just after Darcy went to use the head and he does nothing, until he realizes its minutes later and neither should be taking that long to come out?

He should've been outside that women's restroom door, having helped her to the head himself and waiting there, to protect her and help her back to the table!

That way, when womanizing, worthless fuck Mark, came out of mens head, I just bet he wouldn't of said anything to Darcy's finance, would he? Case closed, problem resolved, before it ever got out of hand!

I disagree with that same commenter, when they say that, the male finance should let Darcy have another chance, after catching her so deep in Marks embrace and kissing him, in the back parking lot.

The facts are, that cheating bimbo, well knew when Mark asked her, outside the women head door in that back hallway, what Mark was meeting her there for! She KNEW that he had planned to catch her there, she already knew, Mark wanted more, wanted her and he knew she was engaged to be married soon!

She knew that she was cheating on her finance, ever going out back to talk, outside with Mark, because people don't go out back to talk, like that, they go outside for foreplay, or sex! So, she knew it was wrong and could get her in serious trouble with her finance, to go with Mark anywhere, after she got out of the restroom!

Her finance acted and reacted, exactly correctly! Only, if that were me, when the bastard hit the ground, I would boot stomped and ground his balls into parking lot pavement, crushed them, tried to rip them off his body, and ruined any chance for his future sex life, on-the-spot! A few hard kicks in the groin, would help to injure his fucking prick so bad, he'd never get it up again, or if he did, it would be damned painful for him!

Then, the second I heard Darcy scream or say or do anything to try and stop me teaching Mark a life long, hard earned, very painful lesson, I'd of kneed that slut so hard in cunt, she woulda been sucking wind and sore, for weeks!

Then, I would dumped her, after I read her the right act, for ever flirting like that, with anyone else, while betrothed, to marry me!

DARCY KNEW BETTER THAN THAT BULLSHIT! YET, SHE LET IT HAPPEN, SO THE FAULT IS STILL HERS!!

No WAY I'd ever take the whoring slut back again! She's as worthless as tits on a boar hog!

That's my two-bits worth and...all I got to say.

I'll be looking for other new stories you write JPB, hope they are better than this one!

same old story!

It seems some stupid people think it's the man's responsibility to keep another man's hands off his girl! Whatever happened to the WOMAN'S duty to MAKE another guy see that she's not a slut and DEMAND that he respect her? Also, even if it WAS the guy's responsibility, how the hell can he watch her 24/7? How stupid can some people be!

qsk dear annony about being stupid. He;s the pro

I would say he is the king of stupid. gave this a 5 for a great LW story

A Woman's View

An engaged woman does not walk away from her fiance and go outside into the dark to 'talk' to another man. His problems are of no concern to her. An engaged woman does not let another man grab her ass in front of her fiance and friends. An engaged woman does not return the kind of kiss Mark gave her outside in the dark. My view as a woman: Darcey is, and always will be a skank, a slut, and a sneaky whore. Two stars for leaving it unfinished.

Yes she is a slut....

I agree with Nancyharpman...she is a slut..had Rob married her she weoukd have cheated on him every chance she get..
All the warnings r there....
Why on earth did Rob want to give her a chance...I would have tolls her t o go island in a street lines cheapp whore n try to get some pine to fuck Her..
And tell her to never show her face to him again.


PPSD79 : INDIA

He will marry her and she will cheat on him

but he desrves it. Anyone who talks by asking questions and then answering them deserves every shitty thing he gets. Is this rough? Yes it is. Is it justifiable? Of course.

Thank you nancyharpman17

Excellent comment. Once they have agreed to become exclusive and she has a ring on her finger, there is no excuse to get drunk and be somewhere with another man. Did she do something stupid? Absolutely! Would she do it again? Probably. And her thoughts of marrying Mark so Rob would come to her rescue was pure lunacy. Cut her loose and let her become someone else's problem. Wait... he wondered why he hadn't fucked her in the ass. Keep her around for a while for a butt-fuck buddy. He might as well get something out of this.

So I wonder...

Would I OK with a friend - even my best friend - putting his hands on my wife's ass...?

And it seems the answer is no...

So, by extension, would I OK with my wife LETTING my friend put his hands on her ass...?

And, again, the answer looks like no...

So, yeah, I'd have a problem with my fiance doing that... to the point I'd wonder if it was worth trying to stay with her...

And there's no hypocrisy in that... I don't think my wife's friends should be copping feels either...

good story

I would say so. If this scene was set about 50 years ago, the sentiment would be different than it is today. Things never stay the same, nor do feelings, they are always changing with every generation. The reaction from the different commenters shows this. Showing love towards your wife openly 50 years ago would have been a no-no. Today, depending on where you live open affection between two gay guys is ok. I am not saying either is bad or good, all I am saying is they were young. They did love each other, in their minds. Young ones make big mistakes, and pay big prices for it. I wish the couple well, and a happy ever after.

She is a whore

She was stupid to be letting Mark grab her ass and kiss him but she became a true whore when she started fucking the idiot she blew up her relationship with and then married him.

Some people should be sterilized so they don't spread stupid slut genes.

seems unfinished

Unfinished

Don't you fucking ever finish anything.gave up reading your stories as they waste time as nothing is developed