All Comments on 'Trish'

I gave you a 5 not so much for the sex content, which isn't much, but for the encouragement of a potentially good writer. Hope you write more and more. Probably you won't get high feedback scores at first, but keep at it. My first Lit story still sits around 3.0, but later efforts (after 2 years) are in the 4.6-4.7 range. Keep at it, it's a craft like anything else.

and almost blow-for-blow matching my own experience. This is what life is all about. Keep writing!

he was wearing a purple dress