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Becoming a Slut Wife Rachel

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/29/09

This is screwed up on so many levels its hard

to take a tack. Fucking around, especially bareback, isnt really healthy and even if it doesnt harm the baby directly any diseases she acquires (and she will) will be passed on to the baby and that danger even runs will she is breast feeding. No woman is so mentally off by hormones she cant tell right from wrong and willingly harm her baby. She chose to cheat, it wasnt revenge, she wanted to cheat even before she knew her husband was. She was as guilty as he was maybe even more so because she planned it. What the husband needs, without evidence she cant prove he was cheating, is proof she is cheating and having gangbangs, maybe cameras in the home then divorce her and get custody for the child as she is an unfit mother. You are right she is a slut but not because of her husband, she chose to be one.

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by Harryin VA09/29/09

Good thing the wife has standards

she isnt ready to have another man's baby and lied to her husband about it. Good to have limits

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by Anonymous09/29/09

Sorry

didn't find this erotic, no reason for wife to stay married, at all.

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by digdaddyrich09/29/09

Only thing that matters is if they are happy

Her husband was stupid when he missed out fucking her when she was pregnant. She's smart not wanting to get pregnant again, because she and her husband will probably split up and one child will be hard enough to raise by herself. That old saying, when out for revenge dig two graves, applies here. She might be able to show her husband all of the nasty sex she has had, but her husband is so shallow, he will just shrug it off and find another piece of ass.

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by bruce2209/29/09

A bit drab and repetitious

It could have been done with less than half of the words!
This looks like something that would be written when the author was depressed, perhaps it would have been better to leave it on the hard disk at home. All it says is that everyone is a cheating ass hole and I am definitely not worried about what happens to me or my child.. Pretty scary.

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by Anonymous09/29/09

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by Anonymous10/10/09

what is the use of it all

rachel and tony live out these games, and tony is a provider and father. her new philosphy of 'let him' without the more, makes her, i am not sure what. at the point the game falls apart, it will be overdue and rachel can be a single mother that is not lonely. those accidental discoveries that mess with the most carfeul plans, with unwanted consequences.

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by Ducky710/10/09

So did Tony really cheat or what?

He was in a restaurant with a woman. The slut never ask what it was about or even confronted him. She just spread her legs. She is a real slut. Tony should find out take the baby and leave her with nothing but a mattress. Is well written and the sex is very erotic but the topic is a let down, no revenge.

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by tazz31711/02/11

NOT BECOMING

is, was and always will be/ TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Overthefalls07/25/13

Only one problem

I simply find it implausible that the husband is SO clueless that he never catches her.
Someone screwing around that much always makes a mistake and gets caught. That would be a good sequel. I wonder if he could dump her and keep custody?

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by EgoTrixi10/20/13

Do not ask for a correcting sequel...

...JPB adores and worships wimpy behaviour and cuckoldry, I guess. Some sort of compensation of his actual life, it seems.

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by Drbeamer333309/04/14

Having a gangbang with a baby in the room is a tad creepy.

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by Anonymous11/24/14

Just a note

Tony was so concerned over his wife and his new baby that he installed nanny cams so he could watch them. When he saw what was going on, love turned to hate, he cleaned out the bank accounts, closed his 401k, cancelled the credit cards and the cell phone accounts and the next day while she was out with the baby he packed everything he wanted into a rental trailer and left. He left his wedding ring on the kitchen table along with a copy of the videos of her cheating. He also sent a copy of the video to her parents and everyone she knew that he could find an address for. She never heard from him again. He never filed for divorce, he just disappeared. The end.

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by Anonymous11/24/14

1*

Didn't do anything for me.

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by tazz31711/24/14

MONKEY SEE...MONKEY RE-CAPITULATE

but sooner or later the bough will break. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Anonymous11/14/15

Sorry but no man could possible be THAT stupid

The character of Tom was just too stupid. I couldn't enjoy the story because every time I turned around Tom was doing or saying or accepting something so unbelievable stupid that I laughed out loud! This was just over-the-top nonsense.

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by chytown04/28/16

O K Story***

Thanks.

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by Anonymous06/16/16

More Believable Than One May Think

An interesting medical statistic. Almost one out of five 'fathers' listed on birth certificates ARE NOT THE ACTUAL BIOLOGICAL FATHERS. This means that almost one out of five daddies are raising and supporting other men's babies. I know one man who is supporting THREE children fathered by three of his brothers. It happens. A helluva lot!

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