Stupid. He had so many bindings and you didn't mention them. Like the leash on his genitals and throat. Tape on each ankle, mouth, other hand. You have to remember to say what was taken off or you confuse the reader.!
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Stupid. He had so many bindings and you didn't mention them. Like the leash on his genitals and throat. Tape on each ankle, mouth, other hand. You have to remember to say what was taken off or you confuse the reader.!
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