All Comments on 'Paige From Her Diary'

Believable premise, well told narrative. I liked it a lot. Keep up the good work.

I really enjoyed this story. It is great although I wish it was longer & included a little bit about what happens when she moves in.

it took to read this excellent entry. It was well written, moved forward at a good pace, and kept my interest on edge. Please do not keep us waiting for the next chapter.

This is a fantastic story. Very well done.

I went to my mom's bathroom to do a #2 and needed reading material so I brought up Literotica, and when I was done with your story I was wiping the cum off my cock before wiping my ass. Well you wanted feedback so there it is. :-D

Would love to read more of these two.

Great story, good play on words, excellent twist on the normal secret diary device, And the last entry was inspired. Please write more. I'm already waiting for your next one.

Hope to read the next chapter about their lives in San Francisco

fulfilling an overdue love relationship. Thanks for the good read, excellently written.

There must be more to this story. If they've done it once and enjoyed it, I'm willing to bet they will try it again, so I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Very graphic, realistic, and HOT!

That's how your story left me ...feeling good .

Where's chapter 2??

that was an awesome story ya just need to continue writing cause i'm sure the continuations will be just as good as that one

A beautiful story. More please.

I love incest/taboo stories......

it seems he would have been more pissed off after reading the diary and when she showed up he would have showed it to her and asked why she never told him after the mom took her away why didn't she call or write or have a friend tell him it sure as hell would have pissed me off big time all that wishing and wanting and she never tried to let him know she sure couldn't have cared for him very much

I loved the buildup and finally the sex, and I especially like the beginning development of a long-term relationship. It would be great to follow these two to a lifetime commitment.

I really like this story. Both siblings finally got each other. Keep up the good work.

As an incest story, this is one of the best I've read....though I tend to choose titles wisely anyway so 90% of the ones I read are good. Makes me wonder about my sister a bit...well she's my half sister (different mothers)...met her twice now...the second time pretty much has kept us from talking to eachother after the arguement about the way she acted...she also happens to be bisexual...I wonder is she has a diary and has ever thought that way about me as I sometimes do about her (once a week to be more specific). I've found out it's actually quite natural for family to have a sexual draw to eachother more specifically brother and sister and the mother son/father daughter...I've only been reading stories about this stuff for passing the time and thinking as if it were me and my sis or mom in the stories depending on the relationship part of the stories on who it involves. Keep up the good work, I'll read the second part tomorrow.

Excellent loved it. Need more. very erotic and a happy ending :-)

You did a great job. Keep them cumming. Thanks

I said I'd read another of your storys today. And I think I chose pretty good because this story is just as hot as the first story I read. If these are examples of your entire work, I have alot of enjoyable reading ahead of me!

It's always nice to turn loose of my own reality and temporarily adopt someone else's. The story was very enjoyable.

Very well written and extremely hot and sexy. Please write more of this couple. The character's attraction to his sister's panties was very hot.

Thoroughly enjoyed this little story. Maybe a sequel?

You watch mythbusters don't you? Lol

WHY wasn't he pissed off after reading the diary? if i read it and found out she wanted me but was taken away before she could act i would wonder WHY she never said anything between then and now. she sure couldn't have cared much if she never tried to tell him she could have sent a letter, phoned or had a friend tell him but no instead he finds out years later reading a diary. that would have pissed me off big time and i would have avoided and ignored her at all costs because she proved she had no real love for him with all those years of silence. lets start giving HONEST OPINIONS PLEASE this story sucked big time.

I enjoyed your sister story, and have sent you a follow up for you to ponder.

Will continue to explore your other work.

What's with all the women in your stories "warbling"? In all my 60 years and the many women I've enjoyed I've heard women moan, groan, yell, scream, squeak, screech, queef and even fart during sex and when they cum, but the only thing I've ever heard warble is a bird. Can't you come up with some other sound for them to make and not always the same one? Have you ever actually made love with a women?

2: To be sounded in a trilling or quavering manner

If I've ever put the word warbling by itself, not as a modifier, then it was an editing mistake =P

And if you've never made a woman do it, then you're not doing it right *evil grin*

I want these two to keep going and live together-so they're good for follow-ups; the story was great, nice and hot and romantic too-well written. thanks

I felt that it was very realistic. Under the circumstances; I'd keep the house and rent it out because sometimes you can't replace that kind of history. Besides; it would always be a safety net in troubled times.

to the Anons above; "Why would he be upset at Sis?"; it was Mom that split them up! Think about the mental abuse that sis went through, not only was she caught, but she was traumatized and taken away from "her Mikey"! Don't you get it; "she loved him", not just as a sister.

They were given a second chance and sis followed thru; she went to his room to tempt him, even though she wasn't aware that he'd found the diary. As a matter of fact; she probably figured that Mom had destroyed it so that no one else would ever find out about it.. DKP

Yes I loved it. I hope they keep going for a while.

he should have been mad as hell because she proved she had NO feelings for him by not letting him know after she was taken away. she had acess to the phone and a mail box plus friends she had ample ways of letting him know long before this. by waiting she proved she had no love and he should have been mad as hell and avoided her at all costs.

This is one hot story, very erotic.

Between you and "NOT GOOD" guy further below, sounding a little on the insecure side of things... did mummy leave you alone for a few minutes while you were growing up or something? Fucking pussy.

That was an excellent story and I hope chapter two is in the works?

Loved it

This was awesome! Great writing. Loved it!

I loved it, hell I was hard the entire read! ...of course her calling him Mikey just did it for me, obviously. ...loved her posessiveness (did I get my s's right? Heh;) of him... 'My Mikey' ;)

...damn I need a horny, needy, nympho sister with a brother fetish/fixation! (Or faxsimilie therof;)

I Like the innocent voyeur revealed in discovering her diary after that I couldn't look away. Great idea, also I'm glad you didn't pound us with brother and sister, I was very aware of this, tremor in the "force". Very hot and I chose, to think of them as just any young lust filled lovers ?

The whole story was beautifully done and wonderfully paced. The diary ending was delightful. Thanks.

Love stuff like this, can't wait to read all of your stories.

Wow what a hot tale. Love to read more just like this. Another chapter of how they get on as a couple in Sanfrancisco would be very good too.

So, like three pissy rants about sis not really loving him, trying to contact him, etc. ugh. Almost looks to me like they were written by the same person, though one didn't bother with punctuation.

She's eighteen, dealing with all these new, forbidden emotions, and who knows, she might have chickened out that night and not gone in his room for fear of rejection and humiliation! Sure she knew he was sniffing her panties, but that *could* be a far cry from him actually wanting to fuck you, much less being in love with you. She was dealing with a lot of unknowns. It's easy to say 'she should've and she could've' but realistically most people that would be put in her shoes would have done the same thing.

Email? The story doesn't says what year that happened so don't assume they had email. Phone? If it was before email then they likely just had the house phone, so most likely mom would answer it every time. How often do brothers answer the house phone? Lol. Write? Mom checks the mail, brothers rarely care unless they're told to. Friends? What, tell your friends to call your brother and tell him you're in love with him and want to fuck him? Riiiiiiight. ...and not likely mom would be sharing with you where he is living and going to school once he moves out. ...add to that, distance and time breeds more fear, worry and doubt on a decision like that, even if you are in love with him. ...and while it's not the case, as far as we can tell here, sometimes even if you're in love with someone doesn't mean it's good for you to be with them. Been there, the first of only two women I've ever been in love with was NOT a good woman! She's been married to the same guy that knocked her up (I'm sure intentionally since he IS in love with her and at best she only might have loved him a little) because her parents would have shit if she had two kids without being married. They have like three more and I guarantee you she still cheats on him now like she did then. She could never keep her pants on, lol. Problem is you can't control who you fall in love with!

....and what about the flip side? Not like he ever bothered to call or visit his sister, even though he knew where she was! ...and he didn't have the stigma of mom and aunt knowing she wanted to fuck him hanging over his head to cloud his decisions!

Funny thing is, usually the people screaming the loudest are usually the last ones to actually do anything when the time comes. Here, put on my shoes and walk a mile! ;)

Even in non taboo love real life gets in the way of keeping in contact with people you love. Or are desperately madly in love with, and they know it, and they straight up tell you that they don't trust themselves to be around you while looking straight into your eyes - not because they don't want you, but because they do. As short as this was, and lust driven as this was it still got me right in the feelings. I can't say I enjoyed that portion of it but it sure surprised me. But hey, that's just me projecting my own baggage. Well done piece.

Thank you for the story, I loved it. I have fantasized about fucking my sister for many years. We are both in our fifties now and I still want to fuck her so badly. This story is similar to one of the fantasies I have about her, other than the part of our mother passing away. I came so hard imagining that Paige and Mikey were myself and my sister. I want to thank you again for the story and ask that you write a chapter 2, you set it up so you could. Please add chapter 2.

I truly love incest stories if the parties concerned love each other and the incest isn't because of blackmail or domination. I had an incestuous relationship with my Aunt for many years and she was the love of my life even after she died. She died before I was married so there wasn't any infidelity and there never would have been I was married for 44 yrs. to a wonderful woman but thought of my Aunt frequently, I still do and I am 73 now. I visit her grave site 2 times a year which is 250 miles from me but my love and memories are SO strong. Thanks for the wonderful story. It would be nice for a loving followup. :>)

Love it when its romance, always.

Most excellent story. You find yourself pulling for both of them, and hope for the best. Please say there is a part two.

This is my second read and still excited me. Thank you R.R. for writing.

Loved it! Thanks

It was a well told story amd brought back find memories of my older sister and I when we first experienced the pleasure of sibling sex..

EXCELLENT!!!!! Good story line, intense, careful editing, all factors that make a story worthwhile to read. Looking forward to reading some of your other submissions. Keep up the good work.

A pretty hot story. Anticipation ruined by a medsling mom who only slowed the inevitable.

Hot passion between the siblings.

4 stars from me.

REALLY good, and hot-the pic you paint of her body... and certainly not the first of yours I've loved

and of course he's got 'the biggest she'd ever seen', tho gotta wonder just how many she's seen at her tender age of 18 or however old she was...

loving, not creepy bro/sis

Mom was a wacko old bat...

Five and fave...