All Comments on 'Gwen'

Except for some typo's and wrong words used, this is a very good story.

It would be so hot for her to fuck her mom and dad. Her little pussy licked by her mom and then stretched by her dad's big cock would make a very good second chapter.Thanks.......Rich

I liked the story but "a women" and other errors are jarring and cause an interruption in the readers train of thought, instead of a smooth flow of words. "Threw" means "tossed", not "through". More practice and I think you will put out a good story with no errors.

i liked the story but i was distracted by the bad misspellings throughout.

Great job overall though

not great, but shows promise

You need to work on there, their, they're, threw, through, etc.