"Friendly" Undertaker

Sick

This a very sick subject,but it is very well written and fits the competition category to a T.It deserves a place at least.

Well . . .

Well done - but not the kind of story that turns me on. Didn't mind reading it but don't think I want to remember it for very long.

Yucky

This is a definite winner. This was a disgusting story but still sexy and sensual.

What can I say?

You gave as much warning as possible at the beginning of the story. For those who didn't like it have no one to blame but themselves. To be honest with you Box, I was laughing at what I thought people might be thinking while reading this story.

I have to wonder if anyone didn't finish it.
Good luck in the contest.
DG

A Halloween treat

I thought it was very well writen. I love horror films, I love holidays (expecially Halloween) and I love sex - so I enjoyed this story. It was sick, but really fun. A perfectly completed brief.

Congratulations!

As sick and twisted as you promised. Always had a thing for necrophilia after playing Hamlet and having to jump into Ophelia's grave. She was a hottie. Well written, and thoroughly demented. Good luck in the contest.

Lovely

Thank you! There are simply not enough stories with this topic. Though, a little sweet for my taste, I was very happy I stumbled across it. Perhaps another from a woman's perspective? :-D

Well written and though not a personal turn, enjoyed it.

wow....

i thought she was gonna wake up at ay moment and scare the shit out of the guy! but this was a goof surprising turn too lol i was just sitting there reading this like....oh....my....god...... but trying not to laugh at the same time job well done

PUSSY

Wow licking dead women pussy how awesome licking women pussy I like that, I would lick fuck dead naked women too scrub them very clean.

I just want to say I was genuinely surprised how well you handled the topic, something that's naturally rather disturbing to most people, myself included... you managed to make something that was almost macabrely sweet and disturbing all at the same time. I always read for the more original, unique gems amidst the pile of same old, same old fics... and though this DEFINITELY isn't my fetish I enjoyed it for the sheer originality of it.

It was disturbing, but very tastefully done. I'm impressed.

well written indeed ...

Though this story's focus is disturbing, it is well written and manages to fully express the delight of the main character. The proof of this is the fact that despite whatever personal prefances the reader has, they still respond to the main characters delight in finding such a beautiful body. This story is the first one i have read on this site i was recomended to and i am honestly pleased. Thank you for writing this story.

sequel

If you ever consider taking on this topic again I'd love a part 2 involving the same under and a female assistant either both fuck same body after she catches him or each simultaniously on two female corpses. My clit is throbbing just typing that....

rough sex

Can you write one that is more aggressive,, That could be hot.

excellent

Excellent story, I would love to read more about Myron adventures

WONDERFUL

YOU KNOW YOU WILL NEED ONE WHERE SHE COMES BACK TO LIFE BECAUSE OF HIM - YOU 'RE GOOD - PLEASE CONTINUE THIS SERIES

(=^_^=)

yeah..thanks but no thanks... Why write it if it disgusts you? Sex is not like pizza people. Even bad pizza is good on some level. Bad / gross sex is just bad/gross sex.

A weird comment for a weird story...

I actually rather enjoyed this. I didn't find it disgusting, just interesting. I will be looking for more stories from you on here. If I had to say one negative thing, it would have to be I wished you had set-up the story with some more details and would have loved to hear more about the obsession with the dead from the mortician. Overall, fairly good story in my option. ~ Malach

WTF!

Who is the loser idiot that keeps leaving feedback that this writer is a pedophile? Show your proof scum!

my wife was fucked 20 mins after her body feached the funeral home