Mimicry

wtf

What a twist!

A little confusing

I found the lady-thing's logic in the story to be lacking. Why is it she cares about being treated well and such by her prey when she expressly enjoys their agony?

very interesting,

This story was a lot of fun to read because it is in such a different...vein than many of the other entries listed here. The originality was a treat, and portrayal of the main character as an escort with a predator mind made it interesting as well. My only complaint: it's such a good start, I want to read more and wish it were longer.

Great

The twist at the end made all the difference between a short simple story and a wonderful Halloween story.

This was good

and scary, but there seemed to be a lot of confusion about getting on the bed and back on without getting off in between.

Interessting read Tom

I started out thinking ok Tom, your writing a story as a woman. Pretty sexy dresser. haha. I was wonddering when the Halloween part would start but all of a sudden, you grew wings. LOL
Good on.
Good luck in the contest
DG

Got me!

Wasn't ready for that - nice buildup to the sudden surprise. Good luck in the contest.

fuckin bit was too quick