All Comments on 'Mimicry'

What a twist!

I found the lady-thing's logic in the story to be lacking. Why is it she cares about being treated well and such by her prey when she expressly enjoys their agony?

This story was a lot of fun to read because it is in such a different...vein than many of the other entries listed here. The originality was a treat, and portrayal of the main character as an escort with a predator mind made it interesting as well. My only complaint: it's such a good start, I want to read more and wish it were longer.

The twist at the end made all the difference between a short simple story and a wonderful Halloween story.

and scary, but there seemed to be a lot of confusion about getting on the bed and back on without getting off in between.

I started out thinking ok Tom, your writing a story as a woman. Pretty sexy dresser. haha. I was wonddering when the Halloween part would start but all of a sudden, you grew wings. LOL

Good on.

Good luck in the contest

DG

Wasn't ready for that - nice buildup to the sudden surprise. Good luck in the contest.

fuckin bit was too quick