I wish that the ending had her pitiful ex with his puny pecker in hand while he watched the film, jerking off while watching a real man do what he and his sad little dick couldn't handle. Well done though. I pumped out a few over the course of the story myself.
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Anonymous10/02/09
Great series
I enjoyed the series myself...great job
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Anonymous10/03/09
Good Job
Good job looking forward to the next one!!!!!!!!!
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Anonymous10/08/09
keep going!!!!!!!!
keep going!!!!!!!!
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Anonymous10/16/09
Some unbelievable stuff ...
an 11 inch cock, Mom's huge tits, come on. But this is the hottest story on the web. Had to read it over time because it had me 'going' within minutes. Keep it going.
This story was great, very descriptive and entertaining from start to finish. The sex scenes were also done very well and were not repetitive, something I've noticed can be common among other erotic stories. My only thing would be that I could not imagine anyone, let alone a mother, who still uses such outdated euphemisms such as "schlong", "dong", and "shag" to describe a penis or the act of sex itself. Other than that, I gave it a very good rating.
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Anonymous07/07/10
Well done!
One of the greatest stories on here! You have not only got an amazing talent at writting stories, but you have an amazing imagination. This series deserves to be one of the greatest stories on literotica. I loved it from the very first line to the very last line of the series. You have an amazing talent, and I will hope to see many more legendary stories from you just like this one.
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Anonymous04/26/11
Thank you so much
I read the first in this serious and got so hot a had to shove a fat dildo in my cunt. As I was masturbating my son walked in on me and we ended up haveing the best fuck of my life! I am still with my husband but he doesn't know. I feel like such a filthy whore!
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Anonymous05/15/11
Awesome
Spent an enjoyable Sunday afternoon reading this 8 part series. Totally loved it. Could only dream to have a mother like that. To late now, but maybe in my next life. What a great thing to come back to. Once again, it was awesome. Thank you for a great read.
A very hot stroke story. Quite brainless, but very fun to read. Nice work! ^__^
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Anonymous10/10/11
Need To Shift Gears
I read this entire series not so much for the mom / son angle. I read because the mom is a big titted, cock sucking, cum swallowing, getting fucked in the ass slut! She is a major tramp talker who just can't get enough of that 11" prick. For chapter 9 I would like to read about a male friend of Mike's who stumbles upon the sex tape that Mike and his mom made. He makes it known to them that he knows and, of coarse, it leads to a 3 way with Mike and mom plus the friend is well hung as well. Then for chapter 10 mom walks in on Mike and friend only to find them double teaming a young girl who is a similar age as the two guys. This leads to mom joining in for alot of 4 way action. The possibilities are just begging for more chapters. So get that deep throating slut in gear!
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Anonymous01/21/12
milk
its an amazing story....i was so hard and horny after reading it...i am not into my mom or anything like tht....but the story was great.....i was hoping u cud add lactation into the story somehow....keep writing...
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Anonymous11/17/12
different version
I would LOVE to hear this story in audio!!!!!! The entire series!! I cum so much while reading it, imagining a too horny son doing that to me
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Anonymous04/22/13
An excelent read. But...
My only complaint is that you had the mother using birth control! The perfect ending would have seen the mom becoming pregnant with her son's baby!
you did a great job on this story, was wondering if you could do a sequel? Havethe friend from the computer visit. Have the four of them have a fuck fest, and the other mom go wild wild over the big cock, some ass fucking maybe? the other son has a monster dick to but not as long but it's thick and both moms get the best of both worlds. The second mom finally gets to fuck her son and then swapping moms she gets the big baseball bat. Just a suggestion, get in touch maybe we could co-write it
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Anonymous09/10/13
Would love to read the story where Mommy get knocked up
You have to get that one of when Mommy wants a baby from her son and goes off the pill and gets knocked up.
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Anonymous09/18/14
horny aussie
I decided to wait until this chapter to say any more comments to the ones that I made at the end of the first chapter. First of I still like the story with one or two things that I'm not really happy with and they are I was a bit unhappy to read that you had mum on the pill for quiet some time as I would have liked to see her get pregnant,also I would have loved to have seen her internet friend and her son meet up with them and had a four way sex feast. Maybe you could do a couple more chapters where you have mum go of the pill for the purpose of getting pregnant and then show up at her ex husbands place with her son to show him how well that their son fucked as she's expecting quads. It would also be awesome to see if mum has a sister and her daughter who both of them show up unannounced at the front door to find it unlocked or knows where the spare keys are hidden and so both walk in and discovers them fucking and also demands to get both their pussies pounded big time from the 11 inches to the glorious conclusion that they also get pregnant also with twins for one and triplets for the other, the ways to go would be just about endless. I hope you don't mind my fantasies on your great story that you wrote, but it should continue on for another three or so chapter I hope. So with that bit of thinking on my part I'll say bye bye for now and waiting for your continuing great work.
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Anonymous01/04/15
Yes Great Story!
Great Stroy, BUT Mommy does need to "share" that Huge Cock with her on-line friend! Perhaps he could bring home a couple of other Studs from school as well. Make Mommy "Air Tight"
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Anonymous06/16/15
Loved it
I loved your story and would urge you to continue with your own imagination or the fantasies expressed by one of the readers :)
Well done blackfen, you truly have friends on here – needless to say, I’m one of them and have enjoyed all eight of your chapters.
I must admit, they did get a bit repetitive but that’s only because you limited yourself to the two of them and the only three holes mum had.
Your other fans on here have cum up with some great suggestions and if you don’t want to increase the number of chapters to this story, perhaps you could explore some of their thoughts in a ‘spin off’ chapter or two.
But needless to say, well done, for some fantastic writing.
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Anonymous10/26/15
wow
This story line is worthy the time to read, you did a great job. Let us know when you are done with the next one, trust me we will be looking forward to it. :)
English
Almost perfect
I wish that the ending had her pitiful ex with his puny pecker in hand while he watched the film, jerking off while watching a real man do what he and his sad little dick couldn't handle. Well done though. I pumped out a few over the course of the story myself.
Great series
I enjoyed the series myself...great job
Good Job
Good job looking forward to the next one!!!!!!!!!
keep going!!!!!!!!
keep going!!!!!!!!
Some unbelievable stuff ...
an 11 inch cock, Mom's huge tits, come on. But this is the hottest story on the web. Had to read it over time because it had me 'going' within minutes. Keep it going.
Hardcore incest at its best
This story was great, very descriptive and entertaining from start to finish. The sex scenes were also done very well and were not repetitive, something I've noticed can be common among other erotic stories. My only thing would be that I could not imagine anyone, let alone a mother, who still uses such outdated euphemisms such as "schlong", "dong", and "shag" to describe a penis or the act of sex itself. Other than that, I gave it a very good rating.
Well done!
One of the greatest stories on here! You have not only got an amazing talent at writting stories, but you have an amazing imagination. This series deserves to be one of the greatest stories on literotica. I loved it from the very first line to the very last line of the series. You have an amazing talent, and I will hope to see many more legendary stories from you just like this one.
Thank you so much
I read the first in this serious and got so hot a had to shove a fat dildo in my cunt. As I was masturbating my son walked in on me and we ended up haveing the best fuck of my life! I am still with my husband but he doesn't know. I feel like such a filthy whore!
Awesome
Spent an enjoyable Sunday afternoon reading this 8 part series. Totally loved it. Could only dream to have a mother like that. To late now, but maybe in my next life. What a great thing to come back to. Once again, it was awesome. Thank you for a great read.
^__^
A very hot stroke story. Quite brainless, but very fun to read. Nice work! ^__^
Need To Shift Gears
I read this entire series not so much for the mom / son angle. I read because the mom is a big titted, cock sucking, cum swallowing, getting fucked in the ass slut! She is a major tramp talker who just can't get enough of that 11" prick. For chapter 9 I would like to read about a male friend of Mike's who stumbles upon the sex tape that Mike and his mom made. He makes it known to them that he knows and, of coarse, it leads to a 3 way with Mike and mom plus the friend is well hung as well. Then for chapter 10 mom walks in on Mike and friend only to find them double teaming a young girl who is a similar age as the two guys. This leads to mom joining in for alot of 4 way action. The possibilities are just begging for more chapters. So get that deep throating slut in gear!
milk
its an amazing story....i was so hard and horny after reading it...i am not into my mom or anything like tht....but the story was great.....i was hoping u cud add lactation into the story somehow....keep writing...
different version
I would LOVE to hear this story in audio!!!!!! The entire series!! I cum so much while reading it, imagining a too horny son doing that to me
An excelent read. But...
My only complaint is that you had the mother using birth control! The perfect ending would have seen the mom becoming pregnant with her son's baby!
awesome story
you did a great job on this story, was wondering if you could do a sequel? Havethe friend from the computer visit. Have the four of them have a fuck fest, and the other mom go wild wild over the big cock, some ass fucking maybe? the other son has a monster dick to but not as long but it's thick and both moms get the best of both worlds. The second mom finally gets to fuck her son and then swapping moms she gets the big baseball bat. Just a suggestion, get in touch maybe we could co-write it
Would love to read the story where Mommy get knocked up
You have to get that one of when Mommy wants a baby from her son and goes off the pill and gets knocked up.
horny aussie
I decided to wait until this chapter to say any more comments to the ones that I made at the end of the first chapter. First of I still like the story with one or two things that I'm not really happy with and they are I was a bit unhappy to read that you had mum on the pill for quiet some time as I would have liked to see her get pregnant,also I would have loved to have seen her internet friend and her son meet up with them and had a four way sex feast. Maybe you could do a couple more chapters where you have mum go of the pill for the purpose of getting pregnant and then show up at her ex husbands place with her son to show him how well that their son fucked as she's expecting quads. It would also be awesome to see if mum has a sister and her daughter who both of them show up unannounced at the front door to find it unlocked or knows where the spare keys are hidden and so both walk in and discovers them fucking and also demands to get both their pussies pounded big time from the 11 inches to the glorious conclusion that they also get pregnant also with twins for one and triplets for the other, the ways to go would be just about endless. I hope you don't mind my fantasies on your great story that you wrote, but it should continue on for another three or so chapter I hope. So with that bit of thinking on my part I'll say bye bye for now and waiting for your continuing great work.
Yes Great Story!
Great Stroy, BUT Mommy does need to "share" that Huge Cock with her on-line friend! Perhaps he could bring home a couple of other Studs from school as well. Make Mommy "Air Tight"
Loved it
I loved your story and would urge you to continue with your own imagination or the fantasies expressed by one of the readers :)
Well done, for some fantastic writing
Well done blackfen, you truly have friends on here – needless to say, I’m one of them and have enjoyed all eight of your chapters.
I must admit, they did get a bit repetitive but that’s only because you limited yourself to the two of them and the only three holes mum had.
Your other fans on here have cum up with some great suggestions and if you don’t want to increase the number of chapters to this story, perhaps you could explore some of their thoughts in a ‘spin off’ chapter or two.
But needless to say, well done, for some fantastic writing.
wow
This story line is worthy the time to read, you did a great job. Let us know when you are done with the next one, trust me we will be looking forward to it. :)
WOW
That was a great story. I don't usually read mother son stories but glad I did this one. FANTASTIC.
Need More Plot
Your story consists of sex right throughout the eight chapters. It is really in need of a good plot but othercthan that it is truly a good story.
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