braindead little boy. Cant you do better having already read chapter three I find the whole thing not worth the time and I wont reread the last chapter of degradation.
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Anonymous10/03/09
Poorly written...
and you usually do a much better job of writing. Lazy is one thing, but this has too many problems in its writing to justify submission. Try again, and get some assistance if you now need it. Miss the quality of the writing, if not the substance of it.
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Anonymous10/03/09
This is a really interesting story
I think this story is really well written, has balance to it, but I'm not certain as to what is now going to happen after Rob and Lori are married. The latter is the reason that JPB is such a popular writer of Loving Wives stories.
As always the author has a well written story, and has built a good foundation for the characters to make them believeable. It just seems that the story hasn't moved on to new territory for a while.In the overall scope of the story it is very interesting. Thanks for the chapter.....Rich
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Anonymous10/03/09
Interesting
A very interesting story so far. You're really taking your time to develop the entire storyline.
To a certain point it is painful, since it is clear what is going to happen further down the line. Still it is quite well done. Thanks.
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Anonymous10/03/09
What A Slut!
This chick SOUNDS exactly like SUE! Lori is gonna turn out to be the SAME SLUT Sue admits to being...only Lori will never see herself that way...she ain't honest!
As usual. You are so good a character development. I swear I dated Lori in college. The only difference was that when graduation came around I knew that it would also be the end of our dating. I just couldn't count on her. I would like to say my behavior was like Rob's but at first it wasn't. I would wait around for her to come back. Oh, I would date but nothing serious. I learned after the second time she thought "we should date other people". There was usually some guy she was attracted to that paid her some attention and she wanted to try him out while keeping me in the wings. After my sophmore year we still dated but not exclusively. Obviously, since your story brings back the old college days I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work
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Anonymous10/04/09
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Anonymous10/05/09
sue
she was honest and much to be said for that, where anyone has an expiration date on them. but time to look beyond lori, a pattern is in place.
Rob is an ass so Lori should find a nice guy but, like with most young women, nice guys are not hot; they are just not good enough looking so Lori keeps going after Rob, the good looking hot guy.
A nice guy is one that laps another guys cum from his wife and then begs for more. Seriously thought I agree with UA she has basically said I won't stop cheating i will go out any weekend you aren't with me so why bother. Does he have some deep rooted need to reform a slut?
Rob shouldn't be in school. He NEVER seems to learn anything, especially when it comes to Lori. Gazing into my crystal ball I see a train wreck coming in the next chapter. Rob should save himself the trouble and simply fall on the grenade now.
I have to agree with the others on this one. He is really dumb. I don't condone a cheating spouse but this guy deserves what he gets. He isn't blindsided. He is walking into the trap with both eyes open. Can't really feel bad for this guy.
Agreed, the way she has been so far will define her for life.
But I hope he finds out before they have kids, I hate to see the kids hurt. The man always gets over it, the woman always gets over it but the kids have to suffer, sometimes they never get over it. I left my wife once but went back because of the kids. It was a good decision, today was our 58th Anniversary. (I'm an old man, LOL.)
I have to disagree with most of the commentators. In my opinion the character of Rob is a shallow, deficient lack of character. The actions of both Rob and Lori as written by JPB, make it clear both are sluts. And treat other people with a matching immaturity.
I know technically, Rob should be called a bimbo, that was originally an insult against males who could never grow up to be men. His passive-aggressive narcissism, that his cock should be worshiped by which ever female he deigns to permit such duty, is that of a perpetual adolescent.
The only thing that can be blamed on Rob is that he is a loser wimp who can't seem to get it through his empty head that Lori is nothing more then a selfish Cunt who loves to use him for her own amusment and does not think very much of him. I think Rob deserves all of the abuse he gets from her because he a stupid loser. This story is pathetic and no need to read further.
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Anonymous08/06/14
Nasty slut
"...I ached to have my arms around her and hers around me. But!!! I was not the kind of guy who could or would put up with her actions."
Bullshit, Rob. You put up with it again and again and again, etc. Lori has you wrapped around her finger and you come at her beck and call. Oh, you snivel and whine but eventually she cracks the whip and you cower.
"Of course I can give you a good reason Rob. I always -- always -- come back to you because I know where I belong. And you always allow it Rob. You bitch and whine and stall for a while, but you always end up back with me. We both know where we are supposed to be Rob. With each other."
Translation - I fuck around but always come back to you to feed you the cream-pie.
So here we have it - JPB's favorite food/drink is at play again...
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Anonymous11/04/14
Nobody could be THAT stupid!
I'm sorry Bob, but when your lead character is dumber than a rock I just can't find any interest in the story. Lori isn't going to change. Why can't he understand that and stop going back to her? Dumb, dumb, dumb.
English
why would you be engage to a whore
you break up with a slut and marry a whore.
The answer to that question is....
because he IS JPB.
This is a terrible story of a whore and a very
braindead little boy. Cant you do better having already read chapter three I find the whole thing not worth the time and I wont reread the last chapter of degradation.
Poorly written...
and you usually do a much better job of writing. Lazy is one thing, but this has too many problems in its writing to justify submission. Try again, and get some assistance if you now need it. Miss the quality of the writing, if not the substance of it.
This is a really interesting story
I think this story is really well written, has balance to it, but I'm not certain as to what is now going to happen after Rob and Lori are married. The latter is the reason that JPB is such a popular writer of Loving Wives stories.
A good story, but it seems to be dragging a bit
As always the author has a well written story, and has built a good foundation for the characters to make them believeable. It just seems that the story hasn't moved on to new territory for a while.In the overall scope of the story it is very interesting. Thanks for the chapter.....Rich
Interesting
A very interesting story so far. You're really taking your time to develop the entire storyline.
Good Story
To a certain point it is painful, since it is clear what is going to happen further down the line. Still it is quite well done. Thanks.
What A Slut!
This chick SOUNDS exactly like SUE! Lori is gonna turn out to be the SAME SLUT Sue admits to being...only Lori will never see herself that way...she ain't honest!
Good Story
As usual. You are so good a character development. I swear I dated Lori in college. The only difference was that when graduation came around I knew that it would also be the end of our dating. I just couldn't count on her. I would like to say my behavior was like Rob's but at first it wasn't. I would wait around for her to come back. Oh, I would date but nothing serious. I learned after the second time she thought "we should date other people". There was usually some guy she was attracted to that paid her some attention and she wanted to try him out while keeping me in the wings. After my sophmore year we still dated but not exclusively. Obviously, since your story brings back the old college days I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the good work
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sue
she was honest and much to be said for that, where anyone has an expiration date on them. but time to look beyond lori, a pattern is in place.
Two immature brats
Rob is an ass so Lori should find a nice guy but, like with most young women, nice guys are not hot; they are just not good enough looking so Lori keeps going after Rob, the good looking hot guy.
High School is over
She told him that she will continue to cheat, so I'm not sure why you left these two together. I think you lost me with this chapter.
To DW
A nice guy is one that laps another guys cum from his wife and then begs for more. Seriously thought I agree with UA she has basically said I won't stop cheating i will go out any weekend you aren't with me so why bother. Does he have some deep rooted need to reform a slut?
Can we say
DUMB. She won't change.
Going to the next chapter***
Thanks for sharing.
Dumber than your average Bear!
Rob shouldn't be in school. He NEVER seems to learn anything, especially when it comes to Lori. Gazing into my crystal ball I see a train wreck coming in the next chapter. Rob should save himself the trouble and simply fall on the grenade now.
Dumb.
I have to agree with the others on this one. He is really dumb. I don't condone a cheating spouse but this guy deserves what he gets. He isn't blindsided. He is walking into the trap with both eyes open. Can't really feel bad for this guy.
Agreed, the way she has been so far will define her for life.
But I hope he finds out before they have kids, I hate to see the kids hurt. The man always gets over it, the woman always gets over it but the kids have to suffer, sometimes they never get over it. I left my wife once but went back because of the kids. It was a good decision, today was our 58th Anniversary. (I'm an old man, LOL.)
Whoms the slut?
I have to disagree with most of the commentators. In my opinion the character of Rob is a shallow, deficient lack of character. The actions of both Rob and Lori as written by JPB, make it clear both are sluts. And treat other people with a matching immaturity.
I know technically, Rob should be called a bimbo, that was originally an insult against males who could never grow up to be men. His passive-aggressive narcissism, that his cock should be worshiped by which ever female he deigns to permit such duty, is that of a perpetual adolescent.
Rob is a mindless loser
The only thing that can be blamed on Rob is that he is a loser wimp who can't seem to get it through his empty head that Lori is nothing more then a selfish Cunt who loves to use him for her own amusment and does not think very much of him. I think Rob deserves all of the abuse he gets from her because he a stupid loser. This story is pathetic and no need to read further.
Nasty slut
"...I ached to have my arms around her and hers around me. But!!! I was not the kind of guy who could or would put up with her actions."
Bullshit, Rob. You put up with it again and again and again, etc. Lori has you wrapped around her finger and you come at her beck and call. Oh, you snivel and whine but eventually she cracks the whip and you cower.
Lori has a license to cheat, signed by Rob
Read this -
"Of course I can give you a good reason Rob. I always -- always -- come back to you because I know where I belong. And you always allow it Rob. You bitch and whine and stall for a while, but you always end up back with me. We both know where we are supposed to be Rob. With each other."
Translation - I fuck around but always come back to you to feed you the cream-pie.
So here we have it - JPB's favorite food/drink is at play again...
Nobody could be THAT stupid!
I'm sorry Bob, but when your lead character is dumber than a rock I just can't find any interest in the story. Lori isn't going to change. Why can't he understand that and stop going back to her? Dumb, dumb, dumb.
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