Good read Sarahh, could picture you on your knees giving head. Well done. Thanksgiving contest will have the sequel, how you stick it to the ASS's. Also for Sarahh fans another good read is Tamar's Sword available on Amazon.
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Anonymous10/01/09
she is awesome
Sarah is sooooo naughty. I have no idea where she cums up with this stuff, but I am glad she does. I wouldn't have minded being her little brother!
I have been reading stories on this site for several days and this is the best one I have read so far. Funny, sexy, and well written. I will certainly read more of your work. Kudos, Dennis Ricketts
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Anonymous10/01/09
plagiarism?
hey Mr Happy is the name of my penis and this story made my Mr Happy very happy
I mean Art1972 and the very first comment. There will indeed be a sequel entered in the Holiday Contest entitled "Stuffing ASS." ASS of course being the frat rats of Alpha Alpha Sigma. Hey KOLKORE, sorry about no Hebrew in this one, but there is plenty of Greek! Like SEX aka the sorority sisters of Sigma Epsilon Xi.
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Anonymous10/01/09
Another winner!
You never disappoint and always give us the best in erotic entertainment. GerryCPA
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Anonymous10/01/09
Not so great
I'm not sure what all the raves are about. It wasn't long enough to be called a story and didn't do anything for me.
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Anonymous10/01/09
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I've seen better writing on the bathroom walls at the bus station.
I always start reading your stories because the description intrigues me. Then I get to the "i love dick" joke and I realize it's you. I realize the story is going to be the same as all your other ones. At the very least, stop using the same joke over and over and thinking it's clever. Maybe I'll get to the end of the story and realize it was a decent story.
Sarahh baby you did it again and i bout busted a gut ...with my nut when i got to the part that it was a frat group !! Now thats funny, whoever you are !!! You always please me Sarahh and thats why i'm your # 1 fan in the south!! Didn't really care much for the male bashing and the anti cock sucking stuff... after all Sarahh we all know you love dick !!! ( sucking it !) But still, it was a story and can't wait for .... The ASS !!! Thanks Sarahh and get us those pic's of the girl's !!
.
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Anonymous10/01/09
SEX & ASS
We never had those sororities & fraternities at my college & WOW we sure missed out on some kinky fun
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Anonymous10/01/09
duh
odd thing about your halloween story is that sority sisters don't qualify for incest catagorizatiom.
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Anonymous10/01/09
Da Bus
I love Da Bus (Jerome Bettis) but I love this bus even more.Fuck the I Love Dick haters.WILYSTYLE from My Space
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Anonymous10/01/09
No wonder America is going to the dogs
Family values anyone?
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Anonymous10/02/09
Halloween or Earth Day?
It could be either, because you're recycling the same poor story, lame jokes, dumb dialogue, and bad writing from all of your other stories. The only thing that fits the theme of the contest is the lifeless characters.
The ONE reason I read erotica is to get off! Stimulate the mind and the body will follow. And this story did that with precision! Now I know why you're published. Keep up the flow of words so we can keep it up!
You always bring a smile to my face.Your story are a great way to start the day.Wasnt too happy about Steelers beating the Titans tho.We both are in deep doo doo if we dont win this week eh.Buzzardo who cant get his password to work
Using "Fake" cops was a funny and erotic twist. I get hard everytime I read one of your stories. This was no exception and a WINNER for a Halloween story.
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Anonymous10/02/09
Get a life
You people who put all the glowing comments on this story really need to get a life. There are excellent authors on Literotica, but this isn't one of them.
Love the Steelers. Love the Hawkeyes. Love you stories. Cheryl L.
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Anonymous10/02/09
you are the best author
as usual, sexy and damn
sexy.keep up the great writing and yeah, I am one of those that
loves your stories, especially the incest one that envolves the in-laws and
such or brother and sister, not the parents so much, but thanks anyway for
your fantastic writing...bye for now
Oh my, a troll with a name other than Anonymous. I’m talking to you, mrsocko316. If it quacks like a troll, it’s a troll, whether it has a user name or not. You start your comment with “I always start reading your stories because the description intrigues me. Then I get to the ‘I Love Dick’ joke and I realize it’s you.” Well, sometimes “I Love Dick” is at the end of the story, so what, you read most of it and then get pissed off? I might also mention that MY NAME is right there with the DESCRIPTION that intrigues you, so your statement is mindless drivel and destroys any credibility you might otherwise have. I have previously mentioned the reason for “I Love Dick” and since you are stalking me, you must have seen it. But I will repeat it. I am publishing a book of my stories and “I Love Dick” is what ties them all together. So if YOU don’t LOVE DICK, go FUCK yourself.
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Anonymous10/02/09
SHUT THE FUCK UP
This isn't a blog, bitch. Your stories suck. Get over it.
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Anonymous10/02/09
5 stars from me
outrageously funny and hot.wheres the beef? difficult to see why some critisize a fun well written story like this.omartinez
Loved the story, it made me want to be on that bus!
-akuma2486
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Anonymous10/02/09
Smilin like a butchers dog
Pens hockey tonight!What a pregame show and hey what happened to your puck hockey story?I really like that one but this one is great too and all you stories are. Your bud from Yahoo Pick em MarsMellow
I think I figured out what I will be for halloween this year...
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Anonymous10/03/09
gr8!!!
the very idea of a "suck you bus" sounds like I missed out when I was in college...waaaaaay back. Love your wriring, Sarahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! gmta@scccoast.net
I have seen most of the vampire movies you mentioned like From Dusk 'Til Dawn, The Vampires Kiss and Queen of the Damned. Not Lesbian Vampires and Sorority Succubus Sisters though. I will have to check those out.But in any event you are my favorite female vampire! Nobody can suck like you.
Hi Sarah! Another great story! With this great story,you better win the Halloween contest! You are such a great writer! Serious,sexy stuff and funny things too almost making me wet my pants laughing. Keep up the great writing! You better win the contest! Take care,Dave
The comments are almost as amusing as the story, which is very amusing. You really got Jezebel the terrible troll in a hissy fit on this one. Now I can understand you getting Assologist and tittysucker et al fired up, but what is her problem? ROTLFLMAO
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Anonymous10/03/09
pumpin pie
I loved the part where Nikki made her ass into a pumpkin using orange and chocolate edible paint! Being an ass man that turned me on! And the others licking it off! Oh boy! Shwing! :0)
You should do that to your sexy butt then I could have pumpkin and peach pie together.
Well,keep up the great writing ok! I LOVE ALL of your stories!
Oh also I was glad that you had an uncut guy in the story since I am. Not many writers have uncircumcised men in stories. Have you ever been with one? Just wondering. DT
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Anonymous10/04/09
Police Story
I was a big fan of the old cop shows like Hill Street Blues and NYPD Blue but never saw an episode like this but if you wrote one the title would be The Cure for Blue Balls.Thanks for turning me on to your stories.I have a lot more to read.GreyDog49 from my space
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Anonymous10/04/09
yeah your a real good writer
so gave you high rating since you didnt bash the Browns.Going for 3 wins in this Biatch!!!!! Thats right 3, Chargers 24 Steelers 13 Mark it, and get to your bookie now..... and your BlueBones is going down to my ClevelandBums in fastasy today.Vegas Dawg
English
Sarahh strikes again
Good read Sarahh, could picture you on your knees giving head. Well done. Thanksgiving contest will have the sequel, how you stick it to the ASS's. Also for Sarahh fans another good read is Tamar's Sword available on Amazon.
she is awesome
Sarah is sooooo naughty. I have no idea where she cums up with this stuff, but I am glad she does. I wouldn't have minded being her little brother!
she is awesome
Sarah is sooooo naughty. I have no idea where she cums up with this stuff, but I am glad she does. I wouldn't have minded being her little brother!
you didnt spit
but I did.There went my coffee.Damn this made be LMFAO
Outstanding effort author
I have been reading stories on this site for several days and this is the best one I have read so far. Funny, sexy, and well written. I will certainly read more of your work. Kudos, Dennis Ricketts
plagiarism?
hey Mr Happy is the name of my penis and this story made my Mr Happy very happy
He hit the nail on the head
I mean Art1972 and the very first comment. There will indeed be a sequel entered in the Holiday Contest entitled "Stuffing ASS." ASS of course being the frat rats of Alpha Alpha Sigma. Hey KOLKORE, sorry about no Hebrew in this one, but there is plenty of Greek! Like SEX aka the sorority sisters of Sigma Epsilon Xi.
Another winner!
You never disappoint and always give us the best in erotic entertainment. GerryCPA
Not so great
I'm not sure what all the raves are about. It wasn't long enough to be called a story and didn't do anything for me.
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I've seen better writing on the bathroom walls at the bus station.
excellent as always
fun story, nice descriptions, nice surprise at the end.
Use a new joke
I always start reading your stories because the description intrigues me. Then I get to the "i love dick" joke and I realize it's you. I realize the story is going to be the same as all your other ones. At the very least, stop using the same joke over and over and thinking it's clever. Maybe I'll get to the end of the story and realize it was a decent story.
Halloween
Hi Sarah, an interesting story, well written. Ged
mafia approved
the Steel City Mafia that is we love yinz stories an I Love Dick shirt.your the best so rock on. Jake (SCM #721)
lol
Well done Sarahhh. Keep em cumming!
Another muff warmer
I told you before your stories are totally hot particularly the girl on girl scenes. Kisses from Tammy but go Ravens!
TRY MY NIGHT STICK BITCH !!! !!
Sarahh baby you did it again and i bout busted a gut ...with my nut when i got to the part that it was a frat group !! Now thats funny, whoever you are !!! You always please me Sarahh and thats why i'm your # 1 fan in the south!! Didn't really care much for the male bashing and the anti cock sucking stuff... after all Sarahh we all know you love dick !!! ( sucking it !) But still, it was a story and can't wait for .... The ASS !!! Thanks Sarahh and get us those pic's of the girl's !!
.
SEX & ASS
We never had those sororities & fraternities at my college & WOW we sure missed out on some kinky fun
duh
odd thing about your halloween story is that sority sisters don't qualify for incest catagorizatiom.
Da Bus
I love Da Bus (Jerome Bettis) but I love this bus even more.Fuck the I Love Dick haters.WILYSTYLE from My Space
No wonder America is going to the dogs
Family values anyone?
Halloween or Earth Day?
It could be either, because you're recycling the same poor story, lame jokes, dumb dialogue, and bad writing from all of your other stories. The only thing that fits the theme of the contest is the lifeless characters.
Well I hope there is a part two!
I sure want to read about the girls getting their revenge!!!! :)
"Six Rings" Orgasm!
The ONE reason I read erotica is to get off! Stimulate the mind and the body will follow. And this story did that with precision! Now I know why you're published. Keep up the flow of words so we can keep it up!
Oh- and I dig the "black & gold"!
Assologist
Well done and thank you, author!
Great work and very enjoyable to read.
What "jackregular" said
I want a revenge story to get back at A.S.S.
what a hooter er hoot
You always bring a smile to my face.Your story are a great way to start the day.Wasnt too happy about Steelers beating the Titans tho.We both are in deep doo doo if we dont win this week eh.Buzzardo who cant get his password to work
Best Trick and Treat Ever - Nice Surprise
Using "Fake" cops was a funny and erotic twist. I get hard everytime I read one of your stories. This was no exception and a WINNER for a Halloween story.
Get a life
You people who put all the glowing comments on this story really need to get a life. There are excellent authors on Literotica, but this isn't one of them.
Go black and gold!
Love the Steelers. Love the Hawkeyes. Love you stories. Cheryl L.
you are the best author
as usual, sexy and damn
sexy.keep up the great writing and yeah, I am one of those that
loves your stories, especially the incest one that envolves the in-laws and
such or brother and sister, not the parents so much, but thanks anyway for
your fantastic writing...bye for now
Rocketman,
lbmolitor@gmail.com
Finally!
Oh my, a troll with a name other than Anonymous. I’m talking to you, mrsocko316. If it quacks like a troll, it’s a troll, whether it has a user name or not. You start your comment with “I always start reading your stories because the description intrigues me. Then I get to the ‘I Love Dick’ joke and I realize it’s you.” Well, sometimes “I Love Dick” is at the end of the story, so what, you read most of it and then get pissed off? I might also mention that MY NAME is right there with the DESCRIPTION that intrigues you, so your statement is mindless drivel and destroys any credibility you might otherwise have. I have previously mentioned the reason for “I Love Dick” and since you are stalking me, you must have seen it. But I will repeat it. I am publishing a book of my stories and “I Love Dick” is what ties them all together. So if YOU don’t LOVE DICK, go FUCK yourself.
SHUT THE FUCK UP
This isn't a blog, bitch. Your stories suck. Get over it.
5 stars from me
outrageously funny and hot.wheres the beef? difficult to see why some critisize a fun well written story like this.omartinez
Fucking awesome
Loved the story, it made me want to be on that bus!
-akuma2486
Smilin like a butchers dog
Pens hockey tonight!What a pregame show and hey what happened to your puck hockey story?I really like that one but this one is great too and all you stories are. Your bud from Yahoo Pick em MarsMellow
What's not to like?
Even the title is cute! I can not imagine how this story could offend anyone, at least not on a porn site.
Weird
You always write weird incest/taboo stories. Good luck in the contest.
Always good
I think I figured out what I will be for halloween this year...
Always good
I think I figured out what I will be for halloween this year...
gr8!!!
the very idea of a "suck you bus" sounds like I missed out when I was in college...waaaaaay back. Love your wriring, Sarahhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! gmta@scccoast.net
Good Entry
into the contest! I never knew there were so many different names for the same body part. Good luck in the contest.
You should write
books for kindergarten students since your literary expertise is on that level.
Big fan of vampire flicks
I have seen most of the vampire movies you mentioned like From Dusk 'Til Dawn, The Vampires Kiss and Queen of the Damned. Not Lesbian Vampires and Sorority Succubus Sisters though. I will have to check those out.But in any event you are my favorite female vampire! Nobody can suck like you.
The best story yet!
Hi Sarah! Another great story! With this great story,you better win the Halloween contest! You are such a great writer! Serious,sexy stuff and funny things too almost making me wet my pants laughing. Keep up the great writing! You better win the contest! Take care,Dave
Good point, Lebbaeus
Nobody can out suck her writing.
Hasn't she been eaten by dogs yet?
The comments are almost as amusing as the story, which is very amusing. You really got Jezebel the terrible troll in a hissy fit on this one. Now I can understand you getting Assologist and tittysucker et al fired up, but what is her problem? ROTLFLMAO
pumpin pie
I loved the part where Nikki made her ass into a pumpkin using orange and chocolate edible paint! Being an ass man that turned me on! And the others licking it off! Oh boy! Shwing! :0)
You should do that to your sexy butt then I could have pumpkin and peach pie together.
Well,keep up the great writing ok! I LOVE ALL of your stories!
Oh also I was glad that you had an uncut guy in the story since I am. Not many writers have uncircumcised men in stories. Have you ever been with one? Just wondering. DT
Police Story
I was a big fan of the old cop shows like Hill Street Blues and NYPD Blue but never saw an episode like this but if you wrote one the title would be The Cure for Blue Balls.Thanks for turning me on to your stories.I have a lot more to read.GreyDog49 from my space
yeah your a real good writer
so gave you high rating since you didnt bash the Browns.Going for 3 wins in this Biatch!!!!! Thats right 3, Chargers 24 Steelers 13 Mark it, and get to your bookie now..... and your BlueBones is going down to my ClevelandBums in fastasy today.Vegas Dawg
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