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DG HearDG Hearover 14 years agoAuthor
DG Hear

Wow! first to comment on my own story. I just wanted to say thank you to all who take the time to read this story. I know it's different from most of my stories, but I like to offer the readers something different once in awhile.

With respect

DG Hear

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Different

Always enjoy your stories, well written and fun, thanks.

PAPATOADPAPATOADover 14 years ago
PAPATOAD

A fun story and a nice read. Thanks for the entertainment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
EXCELLENT !

A really good story, I loved it.

daluentdaluentover 14 years ago
Very good read

Anytime I see the author is DGHear I get happy I'll be reading a great story. You never let me down. Thank you. Luis

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
VERY ENTERTAINING . . .

THANK YOU, SIR. YOUR STORIES ARE ALWAYS A GOOD READ. KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT WORK. YOU ARE A TRULY GIFTED STORY TELLER. ANONYMOUS IN TENNESSEE...

tastesgreattastesgreatover 14 years ago
EXCELLENT!

You are still 'DA MAN' when it comes to writing stories here! Thanks...

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Outstanding

You are one of the best on Lit! <P>

Jennybear

cloacascloacasover 14 years ago
Nicely told

Short, to the point, and not bogged down in the details that would have been impossible to work out. Well done.

Poizon69Poizon69over 14 years ago
Well that was scary.

Well done DG you are certainly a master storyteller. I can just imagine you sat around a table at a Halloween party telling this story. Thanks again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
One word

Excellent!

One thing I love about your work is that you never treat your audience like idiots. Bravo dude :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Forest "Dexter" Gump comes to mind, for any one?

But I love Forest. "Run, Forest, Run!" <p>

This Dexter guy is probably Forest young, retarded brother?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Morbid

But isn't that what this "holiday" is all about? What makes it even more chilling is the matter-of-fact narrative style. Thanks. -Ttom

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Of course, it's an excellent short story

DGHear is an exceedingly talented writer of short stories. This story is an fine example. Just when you think all the angles in the plot have been exposed, here comes another one bigger then the previous ones. This biggy was the discovery by the reader, and the chief detective, that Marsha was going to now divorce her husband to marry her lover. DGHear is one of my favorite authors. The only issue I have had with his writings concerns a story he wrote a few years back involving senior citizens. DG Hear seems to have the impression that after you retire and reach circa 65 you are over the hill and all you should be doing is sit in a rocking chair on the front pouch watching all the girls go by. Maybe a great line or situation common 50 or more years ago but it just does not ring true nowadays. So this authors does have facts about life that he needs to update for himself. RAG

xkelekoxxkelekoxover 14 years ago
slight correction

doc holliday wasn't a gunsmoke character,that doc was dr adams,also holliday was a dentist and not a medical dr. really enjoyed the story, will be looking for more of your yarns in the future.

LakesLakesover 14 years ago
Great story

Another DG Hear story lives up to expectations for this excellent writer. Thanks, DG.

DrallDrallover 14 years ago
Another Great one!

Different and very enjoyable! Thank you,DGH.

nyminusnyminusover 14 years ago
Thank you DG. It's been a while but your stories

are always welcome with me. You made a statement with myour story ( as you are prone to do ) The message was loud and clear that if you want to cheat then you shouldn't get married. Once married you will be going against God if you cheat and he gets mad as hell. Even at my advanced age I can still turn womens heads...BUT...I will not cheat on a husband ...If I have his permission to have sex with his wife...that's well and good...But I for one fear God..He can cause you all kind of trouble. Look at what he did to the world economy. It was because of evil greedy men going against him...Perhaps the human race will learn else he will wipe the slate clean and start all over again. He's (excuse me..God could be a woman) did it before and cheating is a big part of the human races lifestyle.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
So Nylons nyminus is a sycophant too

and we know you can still turn a woman's head, my wife caught sight of you the other day and still starts screaming as soon as the sedatives have worn off...

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
halloween tale

... 'nuff said.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Pointed as a needle...

Even though I think that this does not quite come up to your usual level of excellence, it is superior to most recent contributions in Literotica. You are fast becoming my favorite author..

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Best Halloween Story of Recent times

I think I have read every DGHear story here in the last five years, and this one ranks well up with the best. Only problem I find, we have to wait too long for the next one.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 14 years ago
Totally excellent

First one of your stories I've read. Loved it

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very entertaining short story....

....but equally entertaining were the comments from nyminus-(though we're all guilty of sycophancy re:good authors),nyminus would be more aptly described as a supplicant-pistolpackinpete

BriteaseBriteaseover 14 years ago
really good

A real little story --- great

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 14 years ago
Great

Always love reading your stories and this is no exception. Good luck in the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good story

Good short story, particularly by the standard of this 'site.

TE999TE999over 14 years ago
A well told tale

'Revenge is a dish best served cold' as the saying goes. I enjoyed this story. Tightly plotted and good dialogue. Good luck in the contest.

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 14 years ago
A very good story,

especially for something in the non-erotic category. I also noticed the "Doc Adams/Holiday" but attributed it to a mistake made by the character, rather than the author.

Tx Tall TalesTx Tall Talesover 14 years ago
Irresistible

What a devastating beginning to the story. After the first few paragraphs I knew I'd read it right to the end. Excellent story as usual. Good luck in the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Drew me right in.

Hard core start and a great way to tie it together. Another great one from a master!

RePhilRePhilover 13 years ago
Ultimate revenge well done!

Beautifully crafted story

bruce22bruce22over 13 years ago
Horrifying tale

The behaviour of the killer and his wife would leave any of us looking over their shoulder! The big question is whether he really stopped loving her. In an egocentric universe, even though she does not love him any more, his loving her should be enough for him to simply eliminate the lover!

Great Work DG

saratusaratuabout 12 years ago

As many others I have enjoyed more than one story you have written and this one is a very good read as well. I realize that some look at this type of story as a terrible thing but you have to have been in the position that this husband was in to appreciate his side of this. It is very hard not to kill when you have been betrayed and humiliated in this manor. It was a great read, my compliments to you.

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 12 years ago
Catharsis can be good -

He found a somewhat extreme route to it but it had some logic, some semblance of justice to it -

There is a certain poetry to all who got the poison -

Personally she was not worth his life -

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
GOOD READ

dghear likes to use killings in his stories..there are better ways to get revenge, a life time of pain works better than murder..

Danger09Danger09over 11 years ago
😳I like it .......but I didn't love it.......

Only because he; A.) committed multiple murders all over some dirty dingy slut who wasn't worth it. B.) instead of divorcing the skank he stayed married to the whore--wasn't he afraid of catch AIDS? C.) he committed suicide ! No gutter trash, ass licking, dirty whore is worth taking your life for... I think he totally wimped out, just because he loved her (Marsha) that doesn't mean she loved him, so instead of him taking her tricks life & his own life, the absolute best revenge would've been divorcing the swamp thing he called a wife & moving on to someone /something worthy of his love & if he continued to stay married to the human cum dump, he should've made it so in a divorce she gets nothing! Nothing as in no clothes, shoes, house, cars, money--nothing! I think he totally took the easy way out & it was selfish, he left the slut --but devasted his kids... There's nothing heroic or sweet about an individual who takes another persons life all over some cum slut who refuses to keep her twat shut, if you kill one you're gonna have to kill the whole male population just to get her pussy back tight. The problem with this husband is that he was delusional thinking this utter complete slut belonged to him, but the reality was, she belonged to EVERY male population. The slut doesn't have the faintest idea what love is, obviously she's a moron so I'm a bit irritated that the loser husband stayed married to this trash. I wanted to feel sorry for the husband but instead all I felt was annoyance, I think the husband is a full fledge fucking LOSER & the wife is a fucking slut who should've been living in a cardboard box.... Suicide is a sin.... Killing yourself over a skank who'd most likely either, has AIDS or will eventually catch AIDS is a bigger fucking sin....

MSTarotMSTarotover 11 years ago
Nice

A very good story. My only crit is I wish you could have found a way to give the back story in dialog and not narrative. That large block without anyone talking was a distraction.

other than that great story.

BfreetorunBfreetorunabout 11 years ago
Not a happy ending (which I prefer) BUT...

..You write with a masterful hand, DG. I love nearly all of your stories.

TavadelphinTavadelphinalmost 10 years ago
You are right -

Most men would not act like Dexter - BUT he did act in a way you can understand even if you do not approve of it.

There are times when taking control has its value - people ought to think more about when they insult people -

KarenEKarenEalmost 10 years ago
He Could Have Done Better

Kill Art like the others, taking away her lover, then divorce her ass.

bibble36bibble36over 9 years ago
Wasn't expecting that

Very well-crafted and different non erotic/loving wives story. Currently working my way through your tales.

aptonthe503aptonthe503about 9 years ago
Good Story

Enjoy reading your work. Please keep the good times going! Post again soon!

GoesGruntGoesGruntover 8 years ago
Nightmare

Marsha Dunworthy / Manowitz didn't suffer nearly long enough. Seemed like it was rather imperfect justice in the end and the ones to suffer most were the most innocent, Dexter's kids.

nancyharpman17nancyharpman17about 8 years ago
Marsha Dunworthy Manowitz Deserved Punishment

In a way Marsha was an Accessory to Premeditated Murder. Every man with whom Marsh's was unfaithful were targeted for murder. Great originality.

Tootight1Tootight1over 7 years ago
good story

I've read it before and it's still good. A unique way of doing things, but then again not so. There's a song that goes, "I would do for love what I would not do." I think it applies here. He couldn't lose her no natter what.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
What a great story

loved how it unfolded and what a great way to bump off the guys she cheated with....perhaps it was poetic justice someone tried to do the same to her and fry her brains...a great idea....now what costume will be best.....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
SHE DESERVED IT, HE DIDN'T

Wish there was a way to let him get away with it. It's always so good to see the guys who fuck the wife get killed. There has to be a payment for destroying something so treasures and death is the ultimate. The only bad thing is that the deaths were so quick, no long term suffering which would have been preferable.

You never resolved the issue of whether take 2 youngest children were even Dexter's.

Oldfart72Oldfart72almost 6 years ago
R u shitting me

There are plenty of men willing to do that.

SkubabillSkubabillabout 5 years ago
Loved it!!!

It's a dark story but I really enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Ouch...

This one isn't going to please the RAAC crowd but the BTB bunch are going to love it! Me, I just like a good story and this in one of those. Good Job DG. Signed: BTW

Anallicker01Anallicker01over 2 years ago

Enjoyed your story! Revenge at its finest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story- one of the best on Literotica. Well paced - a real pro job

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wow and re-wow. Please continue in this direction

5*

BJ

Rancher46Rancher46over 1 year ago

What a great story, now that gives new meaning to getting even with a cheating wife. 5/5

GuSannGuSannover 1 year ago

Wow.. I really liked this story!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

At least it wasn't your normal cuck crap.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

I don’t believe murder is a valid way to get even with an adulterer but I have to admit this story was entertaining. At least Dexter did the right thing in the end.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Trick or Treat !

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Omg. All the bleeding heart commenters. “ I don’t believe she deserved to die, bla bla bla” Here is the situation. You treat someone bad enough, long enough, and they are gonna snap. Remember that….

5 stars.

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