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A lot of unanswered questions
A good story and is fast paced. but still a lot of questions yet to be answered. Thanks ....Rich
Wonderful
You are a seriously wonderful writer. The twists you put in are amazing. Always a joy to read.
Keep going
Sounds like a true story.....and yes it was fast paced.....I always laugh though when I hear how some women 'cut-off sex' with their mate.....Do they REALY think they have something to negotiate with???? Too many women are willing to fuck to put up with that bs........
Way too dragged out...
3 postings, nothing happening.. I'm done.
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Way too dragged out?
Not bloody likely. My guess is whoever said that doesn't believe in foreplay either. Good story so far.
premise from chapter 1 KIlls chap 2 3 and 4
WHY Rob decides to marry a self centered cunt like Lori is never explained.
Everytime Lori pulls a stunt Rob walks away. She does this several times and each time Rob walks away.
Since Lori never stops her actions / behavior this should be a strong signal Lori is Mental.
Good writing
This has been clearly a tragedy in four acts since the opening paragraph. I have to agree that Lori is Mental, but perhaps she is blind, or perhaps a bit slow in the head. Anyway she never seems to get it. Rob on the other hand was never smart enough to quit when he was ahead and learned she was basically undependable and disinterested. But a very consistent piece of work from start to the present point.
I have a minor complaint
I'm spending so much time reading your stories Bob, that I'm not finding time to finish some of my own. My problem, not your's. Keep them coming.
Pure manure
Deeply piled.
Rob is a jerk!
Actually he is so self-centered that he is creepy--a dangerous person.
DWornock,,,
I really doubt that you know what a real, dangerous type person is. In case you didn't know this story is a work of fiction, I just thought I would mention it.
Pretty typical stuff
A very immature couple gets married for no good reason, other than to pad our woeful divorce statistics.
About Time***
He grew a pair. Thanks for sharing.
trust verify confront
great trust verify confront he did all those and why is it even in real life the mother buts in but never the father? and why is it almost always on the wife's side.hhmm?
Happened to a friend told his mom to fuck off and 15 years never spoke to her,she took his cheating wife's side in the divorce.
sorry people, who are never sorry enough
Monkcalm, I have to completely disagree with you. That your friend's own mother took the ex-wife's side, raises major warning signals with me. Frankly, that tells me your friend was/is? a major-league asshole. Especially with his childish tantrums, of 15? years of running away from his mother because she disagreed with him?
As for that drivel about 'Trust but Verify'. “Doveryai, no proveryai” Now you are taking marital advice from a Bolshevik mass murderer? Just because Reagan was senile enough to take advice from Lenin, I would not recommend you follow in those footsteps! No matter what your horoscope tells you.
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