All Comments on 'Jack-o-Lantern Arrives Late'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Get

A fucking divorce.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
previous comment hit the nail oin the head,

'get a divorce,' they obviously hate each other. why should he feel guilty, he says she has cheated in the past and apparently was planning to or did cheat at the party. she changed the rules, either take advantage of that or divorce the bitch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Afraid my wife would hate me? She already hates

you or she would not be a whore for her boss. It would not make any difference whether your stopped it or not she doesnt respect or love you anyway. Fucking the hostess was classic irony but the guilt trip at the end was brainless. She wanted to screw around and if she was playing it there in public she had already done it in private. As someone said get a divorce on her as a cheating wife... Overgrown little boys often cant take their wives doing the same thing they are doing.

fregenfregenover 14 years ago
Have to concur

Why would you want to stay with this person? Go find someone who will love and respect you.<P>

You write well enough but do have some typos. If you are not using an editor you should consider doing so.<P>

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
ending doesn't fit

The ending doesn't seem to fit the rest of the story at all. It seems like the author suddenly changed his mind at the end about where the story was going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Yep the ending does not fit

Please re-think the ending

Alberta  AlAlberta Alover 14 years ago
Please rework the ending.

I enjoyed the story until he came home. The ending as it is doesn't feel right. It seems rushed. Perhaps expanding on the ending will help.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
It's time for a confrontation

The slut is still fucking her boss,probably every day, so why stay in a loveless marriage. She gets off in fucking over him, and making him her whipping boy with the hate she shows him. Dump the slut and get on with his life is what he ought to do. Thanks for the story......Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Don't Forget

This was written by a gay cockold, his words, so he's getting off on this I'm sure.

francis_toliverfrancis_toliverover 14 years ago
A sad tale

A very good story and one that doesn't use any of the standard motifs in this category. A wonderful use of emotion to show that the betrayal was about intent and mentality, not about action.

What made it such a sad story was that he came to understand his wifes disloyalty, but was unable to realize his own love, with his one time Cleopatra. Very sad but very good.

Francis_Toliver

zed0zed0over 14 years ago
I liked it!

Pretty good read.

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 14 years ago
Good

I liked this story. It was hot and sexy. Good luck in the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
She should get a divorce

and be rid of mr. humiliation seeker who she hasn't respected for eons nor will never again.<P>

One who doesn't respect themself should never expect to be respected by others.<P>

So little sick one - go away - get rid of yourself as you are occupying space and breathing air deserved by real people who respect each other.<P>

How sad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
won't last much longer I suppose

That's a situation that will not last. She cheated before. She has probably been cheating with her boss, or was now going to. Seen openly and blatanly being fondled and kissed by everybody else at that party is not exactly discreet and shows no respect for her husband and her marriage, not to mention her boss's marriage. If it was true that the party broke up and she was home early, the way her comment sounded was only of disappointment that nothing more happened. So she will continue her affair or she will find a way to pich up again. Then why go through with this marriage. Let them get divorced and let him find somebody else who will love him and him only.

SELSTIMSELSTIMover 14 years ago
It's the Great Pumpkin, Charlie Brown!

Cute story and fairly well written. I enjoyed it but I loved the comments. I guess it's true what they say, reading comprehension is just not what it used to be. For what it's worth, I would have liked to have seen him play with her head a little more when he got home. Like, "Why would the hostess leave her own party?" "Was your boss not behaving himself?" As long as the marriage was dead he might as well get a little amusement out of it. Days later.... "How's that hairy chested boss of yours?" Thank you

XamphosXamphosover 14 years ago
Sad Ending

I like the story, the idea of the cuckold getting his revenge on the cheating wife. But should it really end like that? Would the wife try again with her boss, is there not another opportunity for jack o lantern to find another Cleopatra. Perhaps over a period maybe his wife could become the Queen of the Nile.

Please have a think and see if you can continue the story. Remember this is not real life ( I hope) this is a story of sexual fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
how can he be the cuckold if

he fucked someone and his wife didn't?

SleeplessinMD2SleeplessinMD2over 14 years ago
Once A Cuckold Always A Cuckold!

The main problem with this story is the things are unresolved. The husband exhibited the cuckold mindset, i.e., "I can not live without her so I put up with whatever she does to me." So we are left with a lifeless marriage and two people who are sleepwalking through life. He stays with her but he can not forget that she would have been fucking someone else if the party had not ended. The wife of course never loved and respected him. Just a sad ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Good lord

Get a divorce if you're that unhappy, you sorry ass pumpkin.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

I believe the couples did a swap with out each others knowledge what ever his wife said about the close of the party, hence two satisfied cuckolds and two satisfied housewives.

An amusing tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
How hard can it be?

Get a divorce. Stupid, unfinished story.

DWornockDWornockover 4 years ago
2* because it is not even remotely plausible.

First the other man would not be fucking another women knowing that his that his wife was aware of his actions. Even more, he meets the other man's wife and fuck when neither had ever cheated before. Stories that are not even slightly plausible, don't deserve a high rating.

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Bakeboy

You.arrived as an idiot and left the same way. Absolutely the lowest denominator of author.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Yep, What 26thNC Said

No more, no less. Signed: BTW

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 3 years ago
Sad Story

What a sad ending. A confrontation, even Hubby admitting he was Sir Pumpkin, would probably have yielded a better future. Perhaps even if they decided to stay together and renegotiate their relationship!

I rarely do this, but Hubby coulda said:

“Gee, someone from your office sent me some interesting pictures. Musta been earlier in the party, and someone who doesn’t like Boss … or maybe you … that looked like you were going to get really lucky with your hunky boss. Is he hung as heavy as he looks like he would be?”

“No, I erased the entire text w/pictures. I know you were pissed at me for covering the emergency at our business, and I decided I wanted to believe you made a poor decision, looking through margarita glasses. And I don’t know who at that party would have my cell phone number, except you. Did you give it to anyone?”

iameaseliameaselover 2 years ago

Calling this "dumb" would be too much of a compliment for it.

26thNC26thNCabout 2 years ago

More cuck crap from shitstain.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Now Bakeboss, perhaps you should ask badmouth 26thNC how his stories have fared. Oh wait bigmouth26thNC hasn't written a damn thing. All he has is a foul mouth towards those with the gumption to have written and contributed to the site. Keep writing Bakeboss some of us appreciate your efforts. LP

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