All Comments on 'Hunter Hunted Ch. 03'

Two great chapters in one night. I think I hit the jackpot. Can wait for the next chapter. I know I'm greedy. Can't help it when it comes to your stories. Keep up the great work.

This story is GREAT...the changes you made make the story even better than the old one

DK, I love it. Even better than asp!

this series is so clear and engaging. Much better than ASP. Looking forward to more.

Hav to agree that taking Hunter-Mirage out of ASP is a wise move, the writing is more focused and definetely more in depth. Im so happy and cant wait for the next ones. Good work.

I've always been a fan but WOW! This story concentrating on 2 characters has made the story jump into the stratosphere. I liked ASP but am so glad for the rewrite. You are a truly gifted and creative author. Thank you so very much for writing and posting. I am touched by the people in your stories, they have such dimension and complexity. Melanie

Thank for posting this latest chapter. I miss the last ASP story, but this is good that you are doing one only focused on Mirage and Hunter. Can't wait for more. The development of the backstories for Hunter and Mirage is great. I love Mirage indulging herself with pretty dresses.

i've always loved your stories and i can't seem to get enough of them and i try to read them all. you have a gift of writting and a way of showing feeling in your work that takes people away from the real world sometimes and i love having a story take me to those places. thank you so much for writting and publishing these stories for all of us to share.

I enjoy all of your work. Looking forward to seeing the story develop. Thanks

I can't wait to read Hunter's story. Amazing work as always.

LOVED EVERY WORD...KEEP IT COMING

this chapter brought tears to my eyes, the way she tries to relive her memories and feel happiness even if it's for just a few moments.

I really hope the cause of the deaths of her husband and daughter got her just desserts.

as usual, I love all your stories.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Got a little choked up on the garden scene. Really great writing!

I noticed as I was hitting the button to read the next chapter, it's actually not your readers fault that they don't comment...Well I mean it is...but it's not. I clicked the next chapter button and nearly forgot that I told myself I'd make an effort to start commenting. And I knew something had be going on with his story, usually you drop little bits and pieces to give us information on the characters. I wonder what he's hiding...

i read and love alot of your work and am grateful you post it here

Awesome Chapter!!! I love that she has this other side to her. I also love the fact that Aphrodite has been her friend. It's good to see she has someone she doesn't push away with both hands. It was so sad to see her with those statues. She is so stuck in the misery of her loss. To see her want to die and use his touch as a sign she might be able to do so rather than have some hope and excited feelings about what happened that day. Especially when some part of her wants him. I really hope he can break through. And good teaser about Hunter when Aphrodite says there is a reason he's a womanizer.

Thanks for sharing ^_^

Oh, oh oh! I can't wait to hear Hunter's story!!!

So far so good....Rouge/Mira (X-man reference) and her Hunter are off to a promising start I only hope hunters story doesn't include Adamantite bones or a past life in New Orleans... That would just be too easy and cliche

If you wish to hear every chapter how I am enjoying this....then yes....more please.

typos in this one, but, wow, you have me hooked. If you ever want a very thorough, ocd editor, do let me know. :) Not trying to insult in any way by that comment. I am extremely impressed with your writing skills.

You are really good with the ends of each chapter. Im always anxious for the next.

Her mind must be whirling and clanging frantically

Thank you