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The Halloween Party

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/02/09

Nini

I loved it was great and continue what you are doing,you are a good writer!

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by Anonymous10/02/09

Erotic and sexy!

You are talented and creative. I enjoyed it. However, I would have loved for the slave to have actually inserted his tongue into her dripping pussy, instead of only licking her thighs. So close to her snatch, yet so far away.

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by PrincessErin10/03/09

Great

This was a hot story. It could be improved but great just the same. Good luck in the contest.

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by Ducky710/03/09

OK this is what I call a HOT story

Good action and was just short enough for a quick read. THX

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by gigintony10/12/09

Cute and tittilating.

I could just envision my own wife playing the part of the captured damsel. Very arousing story, thank you.

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