You are better than this... Though with your writing style I know you will make this a good read, but please try and build some story.
You are great , forget the comments of those who do not like. They should not read it in the 1st place - why read & write....Keep going
Delivery of a car of a specific model/color may take months in India; not in the US. No cab agents in the US would tell you they cannot send you a cab for 45 minutes. Frankly, I did not want to read further. You started well otherwise; but such blatant irritants switched me off. It does not bite to be realistic. You can construct a beautiful fantasy while still rooted in reality. I am not going to read your other stories.
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