All Comments on 'Waiting For You To Come Home'

by annexx

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Scotsman69Scotsman69over 14 years ago
deliciously lovely anne

A fine first effort, arousing and well-written. Please keep writing.

Chimney SweepChimney Sweepover 14 years ago
I wish I could get that treatment

Very nice - I wish I could get that every once in a while. It was sexy and detailed, naughty and nice. I did notice a few grammatical issues that would likely get fixed up by an editor. Keep up the good work!

Adrian69702006Adrian69702006over 11 years ago
Nice story

Nice story.

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