All Comments on 'Virgin Honeymoon'

a lot... of periods....<p>The...writing isn't that...good. You nee...d an editor.<p>Please quit polluting us with this tripe.

Get an editor with guts who will remove all the "..." from the story. Got eye sore in places with so many of those.

i loved how you made it romantic and very sexy =)

i cannot wait until i get married so that i can giv emyself to my future husband...

keep writing!

I wish she finds the right guy soon.. nd its gud u muvd on..but dont u miss her?

Started off good then got depressing