This was a very well written story and great to see you posting stories again. I enjoyed reading it although it was a little weird. The sex was hot. Good luck in the contest.
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Anonymous02/02/11
ok
Fairly imaginative; and I just love it when a woman wears three "lays" around her neck...
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Anonymous01/16/12
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Just an FYI, I thought your story was great ... except for the consistent misspelling of the word "through." "Thru" is not a word.
Sawry, butt ewe missd da ownlee spillin era cawz eet eight THRU ;-))
THRU —prep. chiefly (US) (adverb, adjective) a variant spelling of through. Collins English Dictionary
If you insist on misspelling ALUMINIUM , COLOUR, etc., I guess we just have to agree to disagree. What's that about a common people separated by language? If only we can get thru this....
English
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This was a very well written story and great to see you posting stories again. I enjoyed reading it although it was a little weird. The sex was hot. Good luck in the contest.
ok
Fairly imaginative; and I just love it when a woman wears three "lays" around her neck...
Spelling
Just an FYI, I thought your story was great ... except for the consistent misspelling of the word "through." "Thru" is not a word.
Sawry, butt ewe missd da ownlee spillin era cawz eet eight THRU ;-))
THRU —prep. chiefly (US) (adverb, adjective) a variant spelling of through. Collins English Dictionary
If you insist on misspelling ALUMINIUM , COLOUR, etc., I guess we just have to agree to disagree. What's that about a common people separated by language? If only we can get thru this....
Very nice
combo of sex, romance and horror.
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