All Comments on 'The Haunted House'

Excellent writing, plotting and conclusion. I was very satisfied.

great story, well written and i love the twist at the end, bringing back what she said previously in a new way. best of luck in the contest!

I had fun reading it mostly because there's polka dots involved.

I loved how this story went into such detail. My panties were tingling because it felt like it was actually me in that jumpsuit, even before we went into the room with the blacklighting. I just hope I'll be able to enjoy this year's festivities without spending all of my time squinting at corners for potential voyeurs!

This is the good stuff.

. . . made me late to work, scrambling to finish reading before I had to punch the clock. Liked the way you eroticized the events without resorting to coy and common names for genitalia. Original idea and well-written! Welcome to Lit and best of luck in the Halloween contest.

This was a short, sexy, and very hot story. Thank you for sharing.

Wow That was so real, I used to work in a haunted house, from the time I was 18-24. I preferred to be outside in the cool air taking tickets but part of my job was to walk through with another actor and make sure everyone was doing their job. My bf worked there as well, but one of the hottest actor's would always walk through with me. While I would never have cheated on my bf, somehow me and this guy always seemed to find ways of groping at each other inside, especially in the polka dot room, lol. Later when I found out my bf was cheating on me I had some of the best sex of my life inside that haunted house with the hot actor. Who knew the clown room and the Geiger room could be so much fun.