by erotic_bubbles
more please...do they get together after she graduates & how does or would her going to college locally affect them ..and then there is Holly's parents...see pleanty of room for more...hehehe...thanks alot...esteban
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The author's attention to detail makes the reader feel as if he's right there in the story.
5 inch heels are practical for kid watching? i couldn't find the part where she puts her boots back on after taking off her pants. but hot and please continue with another chapter. she needs to give him a baby,
i love this story. u need to continue it, and make it a little bit more kinky
I would love to read more about how their relationship is building. Will Holly become a permanent part of their lives?
This story is pure gold, please I'm begging here continue on with Holly and John's sexapades.
I love the characters and setting. Such a shame you haven't shared any writing with us in so long . . .
Loved this ending it was so detailed.
Please Miss more from you.
Tony.