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Well I hope you get enough evidence to get
the divorce that you need. I also hope that you can get some kind of revenge against her girlfriend who set this up.
She needs to burn in HELL for this. She can start now and burn all the way there. I hope this doesn't turn out to be one of those wimp stories and you keep the slut.
This cuck story belongs somewhere else like gay
or fetish. I dont like to read cuck trash and wouldnt if I had realized it was trash.
what a lameassed story.
honestly, this has no plot, no direction and no sense. She goes from committed virgin to what??? the town mattress? And her 28 yr old husband is bored with sex? What is he? British? No fucking wonder you lost the war, mate!
i agree
what a lame assed story
Unlike previous comments
I got really worked up over this story. It is building up nicely and promises some lovelty exhibitionist scenes. Don't let previous remarks put you off the sequel.
So did I
I also enjoyed it. A girl after my own heart, but then, I, too am a slut, as my own stories will tell you.
This is great
Loved it. Ignore the dick heads who believe these stories are reality and get pissed about it.
The story could certainly use some development
It is a big jump to take a woman who was a dedicated virgin to round heeled whore in one easy paragraph or two. For this to be a real story there needs to be even the slightest attempt to discribe how this happened.
I agree with lance below
There is a lot of good writing here that is going to waste in a non character development story. No character development - no real plot.
Agree with deckview
Your writing deserves a much less cheesy plot than this. Too fickle and half-assed to be sexy, but the premise of a good wife being led astray and slutting out is hot...Mancelt.
Really realistic (but then I'm British)
Really gereat tale I can relate to. One of the best.
Plenty of guys pull a great bird, marry her and then use her as a trophy, and go out on the piss, instead of keeping her well fucked and satisfied.
It is inaccurate only in that she didn't kick him out before she took on all comers.
Ok, let me make sure I understand this...
The premise of your story is this:
- Man meet woman
- Woman decides that she wants to remain a virgin till her wedding day
- Man decides to marry woman
- Man decides that his new bride needs the finest in cars, home, and cash.
- In doing so, man is too tired to take care of business while out working for said above items. Sometimes man gets really drunk after working said hard job.
- Wife meanwhile is taking all said above items, but talks to a slut friend who said that she actually deserves more than what the husband is providing.
- Wife tells husband that since he's not getting it done in the bedroom she's taking a lover. And while he's out busting hump to work hard or stupidly get drunk she's been scouting someone to take his place in bed.
- Said tired husband, after dragging in after another hard days work says basically "Ok, you deserve this so just don't do it in my bed"
- And said wife says basically "Goodie" where she runs off and starts doing it immediately
And this is the basis for an erotic story that has a few posters going "Wow this will be the greatest story ever? I just don't get the premise. Is her pussy made of gold and every time the husband touches it he's stunned for days lost in orgasmic bliss?? What? What would make a rational human being believe they deserve this type of wife? Is it an attempted new twist on a Cuckold story??
Makes me more concerned for the posters below than for your story. If they find this premise believable that makes me weep for the world in general. Sorry =(
-Risq
I also agree with Risq . . .
This story makes little sense without character development. It is hard to understand why hubby puts up with this behavior. Time to file for divorce, I think . . .
Wished he had balls!
Even one would be better than just being a pussy. Maybe being a transexual would be a good choice for him
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