All Comments on 'A Trick or Treat to Remember'

Really enjoyed reading this story. Good luck in the contest.

Interesting finish -

He did contemplate and then get going on cheating - even if she did set him up but well the follow up would be fascinating.

Whatever happened, whomever set whatever up, whomever did whatever to whomever, he is the one in deep doo doo.

and

double oops

he was tricked and there will be no treat

this did make me hard and put a smile on my face , loved the idea and twist at the end.

I am intrigued by tales around hallowe'en.

As I read this one however I began to be distracted by the lack of persons, of people, and a little about them.

I realized this story consisted of three distinct characters;

A mysterious, unnamed author about whom little is known, a masked female Zorro named 'Maria', and another masked female Zorro named 'My Wife.'

After that I lost interest in the plot.

I am totally confused. The night before everything was awesome. Then morning came and nothing makes sense. Could we get an explanation please? Did it really happen and either his wife set him up to chew him out and divorce him, or was "Maria" a vampire or some kind of monster that brainwashed or hypnotized either him alone or both of them and all the events they think happened really happened?

Very unsatisfactory ending.

Very strange and confusing ending. I was also wondering what happened to the two children Maria had with her the first time she came to the door.