All Comments on 'Thong Bait'

Excellent story... well-written... very hot... Please keep writing.

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in daddy's garage. The immaturity of it reeks. The two older woman are just worn out sluts. Amy is a whore in waiting, to get old enough to go out on her own.

That's the author.

The word "ass" has many. And, sentence fragments are somewhat normal in speech, but not every other line of dialogue. No one does that. In fragments, I mean. As in, speaking. See?

...the low-scorers, and the 3rd grade English teacher's critique. Creative writing paints with a broad brush. The

objective of the writer is to captivate his audience, and you suceeded. Thanks for a great, well written story!

Top story, really enjoyed it...have read many times. Would love a follow up or three.

Great start to a series. Many directions to go. Guy with Amy again, then a review of time with Amy's mom. How about with the sister? Daughter and/or wife with Amy's brother, etc. Both girls together, then with Dad.

This is pretty homophobic at times.

Words like 'homo' and 'queer' are unacceptable.

Lovely twist at the end.

^^^ Unacceptable to who? You want to censor words you find offensive? Dont get your panties in a twist. Quit being an offended pansie.

Queer is actually a totally acceptable word now. Google LGBTQ. The Q is for queer; I say more power to gay people for conquering that word, making it their own.

Predatory asshole.

Sooo sick; so why did I give it a 5?