All Comments on 'How It's Supposed to Be'

...a little short. Good grammar, no spelling errors, or other glaring omissions. I'd like to get to know the characters a little better and find out what makes them tick. Next time, please fill in more details. Thanks for sharing.

It didnt matter that the story was short. The title really says it all. That really is how its suppose to be. Your suppose to love the person before anything major. I hope my first time will be just like this great story...

Didn't matter that yours was a short story, it captured the essence of a beautiful first time. The short length seemed to add to the urgency of the characters first time. The ending brought home the fact this was not a one time occurrence, there was a promise of a future together. Really loved it.

This is very cute.... I love it!