Very good Halloween story. Kind of a hitchcockian ending that I think dear old Alfie would have liked.
Not the abrupt cessation of so many stories, but instead a slow, heartbroken death of the father granted some time with his loved daughter. Erotic, but also emotional.
I have never quite seen this plot before, very creative.
This was such a unique story and I really enjoyed it. It was disturbing in it's own way. Good luck in the contest.
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Happy Halloween
Very good Halloween story. Kind of a hitchcockian ending that I think dear old Alfie would have liked.
A wonderful story
Not the abrupt cessation of so many stories, but instead a slow, heartbroken death of the father granted some time with his loved daughter. Erotic, but also emotional.
Very original
I have never quite seen this plot before, very creative.
Wow
This was such a unique story and I really enjoyed it. It was disturbing in it's own way. Good luck in the contest.
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