All Comments on 'He Knows You Are Alone'

by TonyWards

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Perfect!!!

I love that it was a classic horror story, but with a sexy, sultry, hot twist! Brilliant writing - my favorite story!!!

The BEST!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Awesome!

Creepy, yet sexy! Good twist =)

naturallysweetnaturallysweetover 14 years ago
Whew! So relieved for her :)

Good job with your story, Tony!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Predictable...

Thousands of stories on the site like this already. Makes me wonder though, wouldn't she have recognized his voice? You didn't indicate he was whispering. And if she and Eric were as in tune as you led the readers to believe, then she should've known it was him. A good story nevertheless. Good luck in the contest.

Loca85Loca85over 14 years ago
Liked it

I definitely knew it was her husband but it was good anyway.

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 14 years ago
Good

This was an O.K. story but the storyline wasn't very original which meant that it was a little boring and predictable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Predictable

Ugh... just too friggin predictable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
BRAVO!!!

The best writing I've ever seen on this site, Finally someone who produces quality. Nice to have a BIG name in erotica on this site! Come back again soon - we need you!!!

Thank you, Tony Wards!!!

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