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I love this story!!!
I really liked this story,please keep writing!!
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Yesterday I was speaking with someone about my own writing. They said to me that sometimes I can get a little long winded and wordy. They suggested I work on trying to get my writing down to a little more compact length, that I focus on the story, focus on what matters in the tale I want to tell.
You've done that with this story and I applaud you for it sir.
5 stars.
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