A must read. Not too many on LitE of this good quality. Excellent content & mechanics.
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Anonymous10/09/09
Perfect
Passing eroticism, respect, romanticism. I love what you did. Exquisitely done, completely believable. Never once was I pulled from the scene with extraneous details or overwrought narrative.
Sensual, mature and well told story that captures your attention and doesn't let go. This was a great read from a new writer. I'll have some more, please. 2Xww
Another top quality piece
A must read. Not too many on LitE of this good quality. Excellent content & mechanics.
Perfect
Passing eroticism, respect, romanticism. I love what you did. Exquisitely done, completely believable. Never once was I pulled from the scene with extraneous details or overwrought narrative.
Ver-r-ry Good
Sensual, mature and well told story that captures your attention and doesn't let go. This was a great read from a new writer. I'll have some more, please. 2Xww
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