Readers were pretty rough on MrE after his first story but this one proves that he has the makings of an author of first class pornography. His work in this story is nicely erotic and shows a good sense of humor as well.
I, for one, would like to see more from The_New_Mr_E. We need more young talent like this.
Readers were pretty rough on MrE after his first story but this one proves that he has the makings of an author of first class pornography. His work in this story is nicely erotic and shows a good sense of humor as well.
I, for one, would like to see more from The_New_Mr_E. We need more young talent like this.
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Anonymous08/01/15
I didn't like the girl. She was really oobnoxious. I'm all for Big Beautiful Woman pride considering I am one. But its not really attractive when she goes around saying "their stick-insect, bleached-blonde, silicone-pumped girlfriends." Or "Soon it became a game to see just how much attention she could get." It really is just kind of grating instead of pride of being a big beautiful woman you're acting like an pathetic, insecure attention whore. Plus I felt like you didn't give any foreplay. Basically you just open your legs and that was it.
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if it was a bright sunny day why would the lights be on??
apart from that it was ok.
New Talent
Readers were pretty rough on MrE after his first story but this one proves that he has the makings of an author of first class pornography. His work in this story is nicely erotic and shows a good sense of humor as well.
I, for one, would like to see more from The_New_Mr_E. We need more young talent like this.
New Talent
Readers were pretty rough on MrE after his first story but this one proves that he has the makings of an author of first class pornography. His work in this story is nicely erotic and shows a good sense of humor as well.
I, for one, would like to see more from The_New_Mr_E. We need more young talent like this.
I didn't like the girl. She was really oobnoxious. I'm all for Big Beautiful Woman pride considering I am one. But its not really attractive when she goes around saying "their stick-insect, bleached-blonde, silicone-pumped girlfriends." Or "Soon it became a game to see just how much attention she could get." It really is just kind of grating instead of pride of being a big beautiful woman you're acting like an pathetic, insecure attention whore. Plus I felt like you didn't give any foreplay. Basically you just open your legs and that was it.
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