All Comments on 'Just a Little Longer'

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MaiDawtonsMaiDawtonsover 14 years ago
Very intense.

Very original concept, I have never even heard of sleep paralysis, although I am sure it is a real condition. I enjoyed reading it, look forward to reading more.

FaithWhiteFaithWhiteover 14 years ago
Wow

I loved it but it had me a little creeped out. Did he just kill her at the end?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
three days

i have read and reread this over the course of three days.

this is so disturbing and it took obsessing about it for 2 days to let the horror fully germinate. sensual, creepy, and haunting. WELL DONE!

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 14 years ago
Creepy

Great descriptions and a very creepy story.

shirkamisamyogaishirkamisamyogaiabout 12 years ago
Fantastic

i loved this story so much, i'm doing all i can to have my Husband read it.

i like the paralysis aspect of this story, and the terminal ending surprised me, but just made it all that much more interesting and erotic. *blushes*

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