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Just a Little Longer

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by MaiDawtons10/07/09

Very intense.

Very original concept, I have never even heard of sleep paralysis, although I am sure it is a real condition. I enjoyed reading it, look forward to reading more.

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by FaithWhite10/08/09

Wow

I loved it but it had me a little creeped out. Did he just kill her at the end?

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by Anonymous10/10/09

three days

i have read and reread this over the course of three days.
this is so disturbing and it took obsessing about it for 2 days to let the horror fully germinate. sensual, creepy, and haunting. WELL DONE!

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by PrincessErin10/12/09

Creepy

Great descriptions and a very creepy story.

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by shirkamisamyogai03/01/12

Fantastic

i loved this story so much, i'm doing all i can to have my Husband read it.
i like the paralysis aspect of this story, and the terminal ending surprised me, but just made it all that much more interesting and erotic. *blushes*

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