All Comments on 'Nothing'

by Tooremoved

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medmanmedmanover 14 years ago
Good start

Great start, good dialogue and very imagiative. Well written and pleasure to read. Please continue.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
I hope that you continue this story

This is a wonderful story, loving and sexual. I do hope that she finally get him to relent his love to her. Thanks for the very loving story......Rich

eightballbumeightballbumover 14 years ago
Loved it

Loved it. Plz continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Oh my God

That was so erotically powerful! One of the most moving OW/YM stories I've read in a long time, with the right amount of lust, like, love, respect, tantalizing...perfect.

Any basis in reality?

GloriaWillGloriaWillover 14 years ago
So Hot!

Very sexy story, one of my favorite story lines.Keep writing!

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