All Comments on 'Whispering Willows Masquerade'

More than just another stroke story, this one had characters I actually cared about and some nice romance to top it off. I was very glad to see that we'll be seeing more of Devin, Hayley, and Cindy. :-)

i mean the erotic coupling great but this could have beeen such an AMAZING story if u only keep about the two of them honestly. by letting cindy get he treat of delight it turned me off i mean this was about 2 people. i would have loved to read about these two reallly and waited for another chapter but knowing the turns of event i think your taking the story to something else which it shouldn't be. oh well nice first chapter anyway you have skills but most of time i think it depends on how you use them. like i think personally this is going too fast for hayley and it feels a bit forced would i person ur eally love share you??? i bloody hope not

Great story! I really enjoyed it and I loved the characters. I want a Devin.

I am into erotica and my husband knows that but there was never a story that I enjoyed end to end that I could share with him and say... "This is what I like to read". This story, I loved from start to finish and he has the link in his email.

Really sweet. :) Nicely done.

that this was your first story you published. Some typos but not enough to detract from the story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job!

as you suggested; but ended up grabbing something else instead! For me, this story smoked from end-to-end. I liked the the set up, the characters, and definitely the sex.

Keep it going, you have talent.

Well done sir. I print off one story every 2-3 weeks to share with the wife and spice up a weekend. Looking forward to spicing this weekend.

really steamy and beautiful! Seriously, a very good read and the English is good. I didnt see any glaring grammer/typo error thus far.

Some writers didn't bother with proof-reading and it really hurts my brain and eyes to read those, no matter how thick and hot the plot may be.

I've always wanted to go to an erotic masquerade. I typically despise all things lovey dovey, but this was nice. Towards the end, I had to break out a toy and go along with the story line. Thanks much.

Oh that was a hot, sexy, erotic, and realistic fic!! I cannot wait for the next one!!!

The sex was so hot and I loved the story. Good luck in the contest.

The. Sexiest. Story. EVER. I loved it! Thanks so much for a very erotic read; you definitely have my vote!

What a great start, I'm looking forward to what comes next.

Great Story! Loved the buildup and the time you took to set the background to the story without neglecting the buildup of sexual tension. Perfect!

Definitely one of the best erotic stories I have read!! I wish I worked for 'Devin'!!! ;) Great story... look forward to reading more!

That's all I have to say. It was awesome. Can't wait to read more from you.

fantastic story! my heart is still racing! keep writing, you are gifted!

I LOVED IT AND I AM WAITING ON THE SEQUEL!!!

me too! I'm loving their sweet, sexy relationship!!

You ask for people who aren't looking for a quick fix to move on, but this whole story is such a slow and beautiful build up on sensuality on its many levels.

For someone like me, who has NEVER had a sensual relationship with any of her boyfriends (not looking for sympathy, but stating the obvious), this story lets me feel that i am Hayley and it is allowing me to feel things that I have never felt before. The dance was wonderful! Nothing like voyerism to awaken a beast in anyone :)

Please keep writing and keep you mind always open

usually, i'm not into long stories, but i usually give it a 30 second try. damn. did u have me hooked. i've never had a story hook me so well from the beginning. great job! enjoyed it from beginning to end.

It was one of those writings which make you want to grind against your lover and fuck him over and over again.... Loved the theme, the pace and the description... Want a sequel

great Story about 2 different People who finaly found out that they were made for eachother.

the Vampire Scene was hot too so this Story gets 5 stars.