All Comments on 'Doctor Z Ch. 2'

I'm commenting on Z1 and z2. Nice "universe" but I find the stories a little mixed up. INcidents are incomplete and somehow out of order. E.g. the back story before shemoves to Mt. Pleasant seems a bit out of place. And I did not undersatnd her "problem," she was too juicy to feel a fuck?

I just felt like you have too much mateiral compressed into one two-part story.

Still, I loved it!

Homer

write more z stories

Why is it that the best stories on here like this one are so short and have so few sequels while the shitty ones have a million and are multiple pages?