All Comments on 'The Rally'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
nice ride indeed

reminds me of my wife slow to start but what a thrill when she rolls.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
NO

No, NO, she go the H.D. clap, std and aids from those small dicked H.D. old aged riders

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I kinda liked it. It was well written and had

the sexy wrestling too. Not as filthy as my own wife's adventure at a rally(pre me)but this was A fun fantasy. Thanks...Mancelt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
pretty poor

short, cold like a cheap pornflick. story sounds more like two people in the midst of midlifecrises. eager to stay young and be possible more stupid than the kids on spring brake. you make sex look like something humble like eating a sandwich. and I have never seen somebody writing a story about some people coming toghether for eating sandwiches and go berserk about it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
another

another pig wants to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
another

another pig wants to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
another

another pig wants to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
another

another pig wants to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
another

another pig wants to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
another

another pig wants to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
another

another pig wants to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
another

another pig wants to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
another

another pig wants to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
another

another pig wants to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
another

another pig wants to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
another

another pig wants to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Same old swinger nonsense.

Wife gets fucked many many people husband watchs and gets turned on then they go home and fuck each others brains out and they love each other until the next time she gets an itch. Yadda, yadda, same old swingign bullshit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Biker Slut

Ya, thats what every guy wants for a wife, stupid.

Satisfier2007Satisfier2007over 14 years ago
Frolics

Don't let the negative messages discourage you. This story was a fun tale of wrestling, spanking, and hair-pulling. The warmth of warmed buns spreads to other parts of the nether region, in my experience. Thanks for the effort, dear author.

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These prudes who fret over STDs and such should stick to the Romance category. Why do they even read this site?

Please remove the duplicate messages.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great story

Great story. Perhaps next time expand on the sex. Keep up the good work.

london_james2010london_james2010about 14 years ago
Very Interesting

Hi

That really was some story, but what more caught my eye was your bio; that really was a turn on.

I would love to try taking this a little further and would be happy to provide a photo, clothed or otherwise, if required.

Please reply as I feel some good vibes.

Thanks

James

london_james2010@yahoo.co.uk

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great Story

Loved it!!!!!!! The build up was really hot!! wished the sex portion was a little longer though.

I look forward to reading more of your stories!!

M

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 8 years ago
Good potential

1. Get a volunteer editor

2. Don't lean on alcohol so heavily

3. Trust the editor (down poor ?) GMAFB

4. Detail the sex more fully ... especially the first 'strange!'. Why did Bill have a Big Dick if it never became an issue?

5. Get a volunteer editor.

6. Keep on writing. It'll get better and easier!

3*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
well-written story

Hello from Greece. well-written story dear. Bravo. I liked the "relax mood". However, no words about "safe" sex was made". They didnt care about babies or sexual transmitted diseases?

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