by _Lynn_
I just love how you can provoke such emotion in so few words. Kudos to you.
This is so sad. I want to poke you with a pin and make you come to life. LOL You certainly do get your point across to the reader. Well done.
Awesome poem. And you say you are not a poet. Pfft! I would love to see more of your work posted. This one bites, and I feel the pain--truly a wondrous piece.
When you are moved, regardless of the configuration...Great job!!
Your sharing here is brave. Not many could offer themselves up like this.