Great opening, nice build-up of the tension, and wonderful climax. It's interesting that she's so willing to settle, and he's exactly the skeeze she knew him to be, but is she any different? A good second story and affirmation of why you're already on my Favorites.
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Anonymous10/18/09
Well paced story, great twist,
very skillfully done the pace builds like a good dance track and is frantic by the end. Cheers. -- UK CYNIC
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Anonymous06/06/10
haha that was brilliant - so hot and also humorous!
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Great story!
This is truly great! Starts with a nice build-up then to wonderful vivid hot sex, and a superbly done humorus ending!
I loved it!
Wonderful
Great opening, nice build-up of the tension, and wonderful climax. It's interesting that she's so willing to settle, and he's exactly the skeeze she knew him to be, but is she any different? A good second story and affirmation of why you're already on my Favorites.
Well paced story, great twist,
very skillfully done the pace builds like a good dance track and is frantic by the end. Cheers. -- UK CYNIC
haha that was brilliant - so hot and also humorous!
Sexy and fun
I really liked this story; very different, but still hot as hell. Well written!
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