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The Sister Act

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/14/09

More.

Another great start to what should be a very good story. Please write more of this story.

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by Anonymous10/14/09

hot but could use editing

Nice steam but you should recruit an editor. Some minor grammatical things are distracting, and a story editor might turn up the heat for you a bit. Keep it up.

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by fingers4607/11/12

Very "nice",erotic & descriptive

Great stuff

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by ScattySue04/17/14

Very hot - well done and please continue it.

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