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Hell man
I like your mind
This was so HOT, I know sounds juvenile.
I Would pay money to see this movie. Awesome
more please
you must have a follow up at the party
Simply the best
Better than all the rest (sing along, everybody).
Long time fan, and this is your best yet.
Follow Up
I really enjoyed your story and it did bring back memories of why I read the entire GOR series as a teen. I really hope that you write a follow up story about the party. There are some great story possibilities there.
Very nice!
I, too, would hope to see a follow up at the party! Very good writing, enjoyed it thoroughly.
Enjoying
Although I don't normally like stories in this category I did enjoy reading it. Good luck in the contest.
right now you are # 1
Hard to think there is another better - but all can try!
kajira reports
kajira was so excited to see a story of her land of Gor! The story was very well done, though gyrl wishes a brand or piercing would have happened, as on Gor. Maybe the next chapter?
Sequel!
Very nice story. This one really calls out for a sequel or two. The only thing I didn't like was that it was tough at times to figure out which woman was being referred to, since so many ways were used (their names, Gor terms, Pretty vs. Sweet, blonde vs brunette, etc).
I'm not worthy master
Great story, I want a Halloween party like that.
Ha! Loved the Gor aspect!
Loved the Gor references. It didn't even hit me when I read the title! Awesome!
Yuck!
Simply the worst ever!
Great
Not into BDSM but I have to say that was one good story and a well deserved '5'. Good luck in the contest.
DG
Generally good, but...
To begin with the ending, Halloween doesn't just come once a year for me and mine. Halloween is the time to be one's true self under the deniability that it's "just a costume". And what you learn about yourselves on Halloween can last a lifetime.
The content was mostly delightfully Gorean, but as a Lifestyler I must take exception to one comment. It is the paragraph that ends with, "In the end, often as not, the slave girl conquers the master." More often than not, a love slave finds her love master, but he rules. The love slave may find Master has bought more kajirae for his pleasure garden to -give-her-competition- keep her company, or that she must service Master and a paga slave on their nights out.
In a few cases, slave girls conquer mere males, but men soon remind them both who is man and who is kajira. In Chapter 15 of "Mercenaries of Gor" (pages 156-163, DAW edition and 154-163, E-Reads edition. Borders Books allows you to Google-search the E-Reads version.) Deitrich of Tarnberg steals the spoiled slave of Myron, Polemarkos of Temos, pumps her for information, reduces her to proper slavery again and gives her to a deserving low-ranking soldier for his use.
I regret that this paragraph cost you some points.
Gor has ways of reminding men that they are men, and reminding women that men will leave them if they fail to be pleasing. The only way for males to lose power to women is to abdicate their place as men. It is better to be a man than a mere male.
I wish you well.
No Buts - It's a Good Story
Tx another good tale. All the Gore anyone could ask for.
Hmm looks like 1000 other BDSM stories.
Nothing new same old shit over and over.
I liked it.
Very good story. I enjoyed reading it.
What about the party
Please finish this story properly. What happens to the wife when he sells her at the party?
Another chapter please
Would love to see what happened at the party!!!
Happy Halloween!
Great story. I loved the character build up. The bondage was intense yet playful and fun.
And then??
Like the other comment, you left us wondering what happened (1) at, and (2) after the party. Great story.
Just a thought...
This a good story. I liked it. As I do all of your work that I have read thus far (the Perfect Game series and CvsN 1-26). And while I have not commented on any of the others, I feel compelled to do so now.
Having said that...what happened? You totally left us hanging. Which is fine, if one knows that another chapter is available (or coming) and gets to find out what happened next. But this story ends just as the heat was turning into a smoldering burn. I *want* to read about the party. I *want* to read about the after party. I *really want* to see Amanda reveal her true nature...she is an ice princess because she is bored and unsatisfied with the vanilla...give her what she wants. Make her a slave. It would be wonderful to have those wants satisfied.
Now please forgive me if I seem like I am trying to tell you *how* to write. I would never be so presumptuous as to tell another writer how to spin his yarn, I am after all a writer not an editor, but as a reader I humbly present what we would like to see. Whether you add another chapter or not...Kudos...I really do like your stories..a LOT.
Just a thought...
This a good story. I liked it. As I do all of your work that I have read thus far (the Perfect Game series and CvsN 1-26). And while I have not commented on any of the others, I feel compelled to do so now.
Having said that...what happened? You totally left us hanging. Which is fine, if one knows that another chapter is available (or coming) and gets to find out what happened next. But this story ends just as the heat was turning into a smoldering burn. I *want* to read about the party. I *want* to read about the after party. I *really want* to see Amanda reveal her true nature...she is an ice princess because she is bored and unsatisfied with the vanilla...give her what she wants. Make her a slave. It would be wonderful to have those wants satisfied.
Now please forgive me if I seem like I am trying to tell you *how* to write. I would never be so presumptuous as to tell another writer how to spin his yarn, I am after all a writer not an editor, but as a reader I humbly present what we would like to see. Whether you add another chapter or not...Kudos...I really do like your stories..a LOT.
Thanks for the Sex......y Story
This was an incredible and emotional piece. A lot more going on then just sex. I found it positively wonderful.
I like the dominant touch, but that he didn’t go so far that his wife thought less of him. The competition was a nice touch also, driving her to give more than she was previously willing to give…
(As for the unGorean reference)
It takes a lot more effort to keep and care for what you've got then to toss it aside for something new... like a wife?
At least that was what I thought he was trying to do in the story.
Well Done
A-Maz-Ing
WONDERFUL! Great Story. So hot, and really good writing too!
Need the Reston the story.
This was an awesome story, but I need to know what happened at the party and after.
Anon - sequel
I totally agree that it was kinda frustrating to use several different IDs for the two slave wenches interchangeably while Hubby was alternating from one to the other AND shifting positions. I had a choice between mapping the space, putting dolls in the picture and keeping an ID key handy so I knew who was getting whom in what...OR just figuring that I didn't really care which wench was getting molested, since I knew that the Master was happy! Guess which way I went? Hint: I didn't bring in any dolls!
Sounds like the party will be anticlimactic compared to the preparation! Good read (once I got my priorities straight!) thanks!
Great story
I had to read this after reading your 2012 entry which is part 2. They do stand apart so it was not a problem. Reading this after part 2 just files in the blanks. Not a fan of BDSM but this was more focused on mild role playing. Very exicting and sexy.
Ahh ! The Warrior Code Transposed to Here & Now.
That code & love are timeless . A story of a couple's armored hearts finding each other's true width and breath, ten years after meeting for the first time. Ha! Great read.
Excellent
You wrote this so well and kept me interested from beginning to end. So interested, I will read part 2 as soon as I can close this one out. Well hubby seem real happy fucking his wife and her sister. Have not fucked the sister yet, but oh so close. Who will buy who and what will the new masters want and demand? What punishments lay ahead?
Wonderful!
John Norman's Gor novels gave a young fledgling dominant direction for all of those "sinful, disturbing, dirty thoughts" all those years ago when I found a copy of "Marauders of Gor" I quickly became obsessed with finding as many of the novel through Dewey's decimal system as I could. This story upholds those traditions and follows Mr. Norman's vision very closely. Very well done!
Gor Series
I began to read the John Norman Gor series in the late '60s and was interrupted by the military. I thought that they stopped and after reading the first Gor-ey Halloween story I searched on line and found that not only was the author still alive but that he is still writing the series. Thank you Tx Tall Tales for reuniting with a great series.
Gor Influences
I enjoyed the story. Fun, well written and the memories it invoked were super. I started reading the Gor novels in the late 60's after buying one in an airport gift shop on my way to my last VN tour (also bought "The Story of O" at the same time but that's another story.) Many in the BDSM community in the 80's and 90's particularly, were dismissive of the Goreans in the life. What they didn't like to admit were the influences of the Gor novels on pretty much the full gamut of the BDSM scene. Thanks for the story.
"Gor-(sh) !!!" **
I read 2 or 3 of the Gor books before the lack of sex in the stories made me lose interest.
However your A "Gor-y Halloween" was a tour-de-force by comparison and is worthy of a whole Galaxy full of stars rather than the puny 5 stars allowed by Literotica.
**"Gorsh !!!" Goofy
Erotic
Having been to sexy Halloween parties and experienced the D/s, M/s myself, this is a very erotic story. Just as I have come to appreciate in your writing style a good story with just enough eroticism to make it exciting and interesting. I am going to have to check out the Gor books by John Norman.
PS - I am a big fan of Boris Vallejo and Julie Bell's work, made me appreciate the story even more.
Too Many Names
As another commenter mentioned, too many different names for the two women, and to many shifts without adequately identifying who was involved at the various points.
I had not problems with it, the use of gor was not over done and some what correct
4* my wife was my kajira for 20 years before she passed, and it was her choice in books and lifestyle and she introduced me to it. She had all the books............
Just Starting the Gor Series
Loved bothe of these Gor tales. Any more?
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