by saggittarius024
hmm...risky chance writing on a subject that is usually taboo...but i liked it...its a story, and if u keep that in mind while reading it, you might enjoy it....great job saggitarius!
Mmm, a delicious blend of evil and sexy. Your writing flows well. This is a perfect story for a quick getting off session; very stimulating :D Thanks! Keep writing!
Believable with just a slight touch of fantasy. And - unlike many stories here - the author sounds like an educated and skilled writer, despite the taboo subject.
You are very talented. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
I really liked this story, it was really hot, but yeah, I'd shoot a man for that in real life!
As a woman reading this, holy shit... new fantasy. Write more. I love the personalities in this, and everything about it. The act, and his enjoyment, and details of her pain and humiliation and struggles should go on longer though, it ended too soon.
Great story. Would have been amazing if she had come too, she is his wife.
Great short story, and I can tell the author enjoys both being dominated physically and mentally. She fights back to only encourage her lover to use her more roughly. Very arousing story, Carissa.
why didnt he made her relax or practice with some anal play ,finguring or butt plug . does he enjoy sudden rough anal or does he likes the pain she feels why was he kissing ir be gentle with her after all he likes to give her pain likes to rape her as roughly as possible
what happened next? wont that cause injury to her rectum he doesnt care if that might actually create rift in their marriage
hot really hot why dont u write anymore?
but why was he so angry at her ? is he a naturally sadist SOB? or he thinks her prudish nature or her reluctance are fake
why does he want her in pain ?why did he married her if he doesnt like her prudishness? will transforming her to a fucktoy the only way for him to be with her?
will kissing her after the abuse will make everything normal?
Wow loved it so many stories are "safe". This one was awesome and left you to decide your own answers on motivation etc. Please write more stories?
Really loved this I'm a woman who actuality enjoys being taken. Thank you for a story that's not slap and tickle.