All Comments on 'Out Of The Shadows Ch. 08'

Conclusion was good but felt rushed. Drawing it out more would have made it better. Still loved the story as a whole though. Keep writing!

I LOVE THIS STORY. YOU JUST CAN'T HELP FALLING FOR THESE TWO. THIS CHAPTER WAS A LITTLE FAST ONCE ROB CAME BACK. I HOPE YOU DO A SECOND PART TO THIS STORY. THERE IS STILL SO MUCH TO WORK WITH EVEN IF IT IS ONLY ABOUT THEM. (NO CRIME GANG) JUST THE OPTIONS ON COMBINING THIER LVES. HOME AND WORK SINCE ROB COULD NOT SAY MUCH. DEALING WITH THE EMOTIONS OF GOING BACK TO THE "JOB" AFTER THIS. AS ALWAYS LOVE YOUR STORIES. WILL KEEP CHECKING FOR MORE. THANKS FOR SHARING.

Thank you for a happy ending. I hope you keep sharing your future stories with us.

and still so heartfelt. I could really feel the emotions coming through your words and the images that you crafted. I'm glad you gave us a happy ending, though the agony of waiting for it and worrying about what was going to happen to Rob and Alex was stressful! I love the way they came together at the end. Did I sense another story in the works? I hope so. :) Thanks and keep up the good work.

Couldn't wait to hear more of this story. a little bit rushed at the end, I still want to know more from Rob's point of view and where they go from here. Loved it though. Keep writing. x

I have offically given up trying to predict where your stories are going to go. My emotions were up, down, sideways, and over the moon at times. You have such a gift for conveying the characters fellings that I can't help but get wrapped up in it. Amazing, perfect. Love love love this story.

Ok, this one is officially my all-time favourite <till the next story lol>. Hmmmm, I thought this would be a stand-alone story but Cliff got me thinking differently *hint* *hint* hahaha. Thanx for another winner. 'Twas beautifully done - I absolutely adore the main characters. Toodles... Cat

Ok, this one is officially my all-time favourite <till the next story lol>. Hmmmm, I thought this would be a stand-alone story but Cliff got me thinking differently *hint* *hint* hahaha. Thanx for another winner. 'Twas beautifully done - I absolutely adore the main characters. Toodles... Cat

Ok, this one is officially my all-time favourite <till the next story lol>. Hmmmm, I thought this would be a stand-alone story but Cliff got me thinking differently *hint* *hint* hahaha. Thanx for another winner. 'Twas beautifully done - I absolutely adore the main characters. Toodles... Cat

Sorry for tripple posting. Thats what you get for using your stupid phone and not your pc.

fabulous, thank you!

I stand in awe. You rock!

Fabulous climactic (yeah, baby!) ending to a great love story! After all the pain comes hottest juicy sex worthy of the Guinness Book of Records. And the future looks full of hope, love, joy, marriage, a rich, full life in each other's hearts and souls. This is the best concept and most marvelous romance you've ever written. Thank you!

THIS IS A FAVORITE OF MINE..YOU HAVE EVERYTHING I WANT IN A STORY..I LOVE THE EMOTIONAL ROLLER COSTER..AND THE HAPPILLY EVERAFTER..THANK SOOO MUCH :)

Hi i´m just smiling from this storie, i´m a big fan... and this is one of the best i have ever read.... hope for more greate stories.... your the best...

as usual, you certainly deliver the GOODS! You are an extremely talented writer, with a gift of bringing the reader into the story. Keep up the great work.....BIG FAN!!

Thoroughly enjoyed this - great mix of action and plot and deliciousness. Shall go and read through the rest of your stuff now :) Keep writing! xx

Prob one of the greatest stories ive read on here. Made me excited, Cry, Hot, and D all of the above :D ty sooo much......Gtg read the rest of ur stuff

i ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT! thank you...you could write one about cliff!

I loved this story! It had everything. After Ch. 07 I really thought it was going to be one of those tragic love stories, and I was so glad to be proven wrong. When I thought Rob was dead, I cried so much I almost hyperventilated - seriously! Anyway, great story and I can't wait for you to post more new ones and update the ones in progress.

Your a masterful storyteller able to pull in the reader so very well.

Wow another great story from you...I look forward to others

Amazing story, sorry to see it end. Interesting characters & unique plot in addition to the hot stuff :)

bit long winded but ok.

Geez. That is negative for little reason. It was not long-winded and far better than ok! This is one of my favorites!

This story was amazing and actually made me cry from sadness and then again from happiness. This is one of the best stories I have read in a while.

Great story and characters! You feel their pain and their love!

It is amazing that I can come back to this story, time and time again and still be moved by these characters. I LOVE YOUR WORK!!!

I loved it so much. Couldn't stop reading. So excited about the happy ending.

This story was absolutely amazing, and it never felt dragged out or rushed. It was perfect and I loved it. Thank you, can't wait to keep reading your other stories, and I hope there is a sequel for this.

the ending was exactly what I wanted, you are an amazing writer,full of life, love and beauty,

I enjoyed this story alot. the ending was great with where he found him. One thing I felt was missing was him acting more like a cop. A gun was never mentioned, even if it was not on him all the time. But, if a gang is after you and wants you dead wouldnt' you have one. Would you enter a hotel room and not check it out. If anything to keep your mate safe? also, no mention was made when he asked him to run away with him into witness protection, about him saying goodbye to his parents who he loved. I would also have liked to see the fireworks when they found him the next day and saw he'd forced them into taking. these are just some little details i'd note if beta reading. thanks.

Your a good writer, I've read all your stories and I like all of it, but this is the best, I laugh, I cry and fell in love... Thumbs up for you! Write more!!!

Thank fuckinggggggggggggg yaaaaaaaaaaaasssss...I am so glad rob is alive ughhhh wow...what Alex went trough for those three mths bust have been just horrendous!!!! I love the way rob came up to him in the club...amazing!!!! I literally cried when I read rob was alive!! This is the first story I've read here that I've cried to soooo plzz keep up the good work..amazing story for sure!! If it was a movie I'd watch the shit out of it every mother fuckin day!! Believe that!! XOxo

... story. An epilogue would have been nice. You know maybe a few months later just to show a little of their new life.

really fucking great story one of the best ive read ....jonathan uk xxxxx

First of all , I want to say this could be a published novel. A wonderful, well thought out story.

I love your writing.

The only thing I am sad about is you could have carried this story on for a few more chapters showing our boys in the future.

But as the author, this is your choice.

Keep up the great writing.

I certainly for one, enjoyed this offering.

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I fell in love with your work when I read Cats & Dogs. Then I read Friends & Foes. You are incredibly talented. I'm hooked with each story, from the first word until the last. I get so invested in your characters as I read, they become real to me. I have to keep reading, I have to know what happens next. I'm making my way through the rest of your stories, that's how I ended up with Out Of The Shadows. Awesome, just awesome. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

Nothing more to say! Beautiful Story!

Loved the story but please please please write a sequel as to their new life together

Cheers,

Geoff

Ok much better! Thank you!🥰🥰🥰