All Comments on 'Abduction of Stanley Sprocket'

by Boxlicker101

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
An Interesting Character

Stanley is an interesting character. I hope you are going to write more about him.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great start!

This is an extremely interesting premise for a story and I would love to see where it could go. Definitely continue this one, but in future chapters take a little more time to flesh out the story - this one felt just a little bit rushed. Maybe that's because it's just an intro, but yeah - definitely write more chapters!

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 14 years agoAuthor
I appreciate the comments

left on this story. I think I will continue with it, because it was a fun story to write, and I believe it would be just as much fun to expand on it. I should finish the next part next month sometime.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Yep,

I agree with the other commentors. This has the genes for a great series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
"... next month sometime ..."

That was half a year ago. Have you abandoned this story? I would love to read a sequel :-)

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101almost 14 years agoAuthor
A Sequel

I have not abandoned the story, and have started a sequel. Other things have kept me occupied, but they are mostly done now, and I should have the next part done by the end of May. It is a fun story to write, but I don't know how long it will continue.

barepussloverbarepussloveralmost 14 years ago
Sweet!!

Are there more chapters to cum for this one?? Hope so!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Great story

I loved reading this one. I'd personally prefer the climactic moments in his encounters to build up for a bit longer and seem to last a bit longer too. But awesome story overall. I haven't looked yet but I hope you have more chapters or write more soon.

micromosmicromosalmost 10 years ago
My dream

I imagined your story for many years. Nice job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Entertaining

Good story. Well written with few errors. Hope more is coming soon.

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great story

This is the second of your stories I have read. They just keep getting better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Where are you!

I sincerely hope that you are not dead because I really want to read a part two for this story! Come on give us what we are begging for,will you?

hardheadd1hardheadd1almost 8 years ago
😞

To bad you didn't add more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
More

I like the story, but I would like it to go further.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Your a very good writer, and appreciate how your stories come together

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