All Comments on 'Slender Girl'

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bruce22bruce22over 14 years ago
Complete Ambiguity

Did he turn her back to her? If he had not said hello originally would she continue not seeing him? What was going through her head? Was it the lady or the tiger?

BriteaseBriteaseover 14 years ago
nice

Being of an age not that far from the person in the story, I liked this --- What else can one say ____ Nice!

PoorwriterPoorwriterover 11 years ago
LOVED IT.

Another super fun exciting little story. So clean with nothing nasty about it.

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
just an exhibitionist

she knew he was there that's why she was using the mirror to watch him...at least it gave them both a thrill

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